This story was very well done. I'm sad it is done, but oh well. I am also sad that Alex is dead, 'cause I really liked him. In the game, I hated him, loved him and then hated him again. lol. Oh well! Thanks for a very good story.

Pretty colors... red and gooey... Wait, that's my finger...

Should not have touched that fluff ball... Now Dot hates me... If only Tom Nook would sell me the sword... And if only Nintendo would let the DS download Game Boy...

Is it insane to talk to yourself while writing about your rants while you are ranting about your rants while writing a review?

Wait. Story. Focus... Gah...

Aside - why is it always NEW VALE? Why must everyone just go with that quick out? Even I use that... But why am I nitpicking? Alex is sneaking... Hmm...

I have to say one thing, having finished the chapter: Why? Why? Why?

Let me elaborate:

Why? Why did you not say how dark and twisted this is? This is GOOD. Now I wonder why I didn't read this before...

Why? Why do I have to go get ready for work now, when there is a delicious story to read? This is over ten chapters? That raises a few questions!

Why? Why must I have so little time to write my story, which would give Alex that which he dreamed of... At the cost of that which he loved...

Er, have to go. I just looked at the clock. I will review more later, hopefully when I have some sleep... Lemme just click a few buttons below...

Mikaa, Metroids of Hunter

Hoo, well, sorry I didn't notice this earlier! I haven't been at this site in quite a while, been busy editing Wikipedia encyclopedia articles online on Golden Sun and all that.

Anyway, this fic was an excellent treatise on the inner psychosis of the human mind. Alex is certainly a character that can be interpreted widely; Some think he's just misguided and may turn out good in the future, some think he's a complete sociopath with a natural will to kill and torture. I personally think of Alex as closer to the former, but you've depicted the Demonic Alex very well. Great job!

Isaac should go to hell. No, really,he does. XD

MOMMY! ITS OVEER! ok *ahem* ur a big girl now...

anyways, boohoo its over. it was an awesome story. good job. the ending was a little anticlimactic but otherwise its alrite. good job, and make more fics)

O, wow, well I'm glad Alex died, though it was a nice and original way to finish him off! I have to say I wasn't expecting that at all, so that was a nice surprise. You've got a well-written, thoughtful story here, and I was hooked from start to finish. Very nice portrayal of the characters, especially the evil Alex, and your descriptions of the scenes was spot on. Nicely done!

Whew. It's over. What a ride.

Seriously, this fic left my hanging on the edge of my seat, anxiously awaiting the e-mail alert that would inform me of the new chapter. I've been reading this fic since around chapter three, and it's good to see that everything turned out okay in the end.

Pity. Sympathy. Revulsion. Hatred. Triumph. This fanfiction has caused so many emotions that I have no doubt it will remain in my mind for a while to come.

'Til next time, au revoir.

Ahh, poor Felix! Remembering that won't have helped him, poor thing. Grr, I really hope Alex gets his comeuppance! Nicely written, I look forward to the next chapter!

wow...disturbing... o well, another great chapter)good job) keep up the good work, and go deal with alex)go!go!

Wow, I totally haven't been reviewing the last chapters. Anyway, good work on everything so far and I can't wait to see how everyone will deal with Alex. I'd offer something constructive...but my mind is shot so I don't have anything good right now. Anyway, great story!

wow! you update so fast) me likey! the story is good. its sad to think that it is ending soon... o well, all good things come to a close) anyways, the battle scene could use a little more work, but otherwise, its quite good) byebye for now

I'm interested in seeing what happens when (and if) Felix finds out about what he did to Jenna while he had amnesia. Keep up the good work!

Yeah! The group's reunited once again! Nice thinking with Sheba, and it's about time Alex got his come-uppance. Blimey, bit of a cliff hanger with Alex, but I'm guessing it's not quite over yet. Nicely written!

Very good. I'm happy to see Felix isn't under control anymore! :) Can't wait for the next battle!

Thus, will the final battle be waged. HAIL!

*huge army behind me yells for vengeance against Alex*

RIDE! YAH!

*vines blocking entrance*

DAMNATION! *hacks at vines*

XD Great chapter!