A very touching story, worthy of the movies. I have to wonder,though, if Jose' and Linda were attacked near a certain "dusk-to-dawn" joint.

Make up your mind if this is supposed to be in script or prose. Also, the diologe and sentence structure need work.

A very good story but a little predictable at a point.

A very touching story. The ending was a tear jerker. I recommend this to anyone who is looking for a good piece of fanfiction to read