This was... really "sweet-ish" written. I like how you make (well in my mind it's Ryou who's being beaten by Bakura, but you're such a good writer it good as well be Malik and YamiMarik) him express his emotions, how he's "telling his story", and that love infact can take/have many shapes and differences and so on, I mean, why does abuse have to be so bad (don't get me wrong here ;3) ? Pain, love. Isn't that the same word? - All in all VERY well written, I enjoyed it.

hmm irony? other than the fact that 'he' says he wouldn't be able to survive without the person he's abusing, i didn't catch any...enlighten me! =P

ps this is very disturbing...yeek...

I love it ^^ The language was perfect and the last line was so very fitting. I see it as Malik. Don't know why!

I love it! Thank you for the cookies, I actually caught the hidden meaning there! ^_^ Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^

This is wonderful but.. who are you writing about?

Who was it? Bakura?

Anyway, nicely done and dark.

Oh my friggen god! This was one of the best stories I've read in like forever. Make more chapters if you can. I'd love to see you keep going with this.