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Reviews for: Fun At The Gym
ReJo
2007-02-16 . chapter 1
Great story!
dddynamite
2006-07-27 . chapter 1
Hehe very cute loved it!
wjobsessed
2006-05-08 . chapter 1
Fun!Too bad it wasn't near closing time for the pool...
meadow567
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
This was really good.
TraceZBullet
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
Please write more!! i love it!
wolfmyjic
2006-04-17 . chapter 1
Too cute. I love the "cowboy" comment. They need to use that more often in the show...*thinks* Could be I like it so much, cause that's what I cause my hubby...
Augusta
2006-04-15 . chapter 1
Cute.
roswellwbfan
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
Hilarious! When Lindsay moves to the other side of the bag so she can still watch him? Crack me up! Great job.
chili-peppers
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
i loved it!briliant! that was so funny!well done you have to write more!!lol well done!
Dingbat142001
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh wow! Totally awesome. I immediately pictured the guy scene in Miss Congeniality.

I love it. CSI should have a gym scene.

Do you mind if I use the idea for a fic I'm working on?

Fav line:"She was draped over Danny’s shoulder…his naked shoulder…oh no…he didn’t even have his wifebeater on anymore…oh no…"
2)"Just seeing him in the lab everyday turned her on, but right now Lindsay was getting dangerously hot..."

And the pool...hahahahha so cool!
icydroplets
2006-04-09 . chapter 1
That was such a fun fic! A great idea, the pool part was my favourite. I loved it!
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