 Duchess Nire 2006-04-20 . chapter 1#_# I'm so happy you acually used some of the lines that I wrote~ (Alright, so just the one for Rufus, but it still makes me happy inside.) And I finally mustered up enough random fuel to get going at this. This review is my limit break. Work causes me enough pain, so it gets charged up until I spill a whole garbage bag of nonsense over your head, or whichever unfortunate soul I happen to be reviewing for. It gets a little messy sometimes. I'm sure it's not as god as Vincent's limit break as he waits for the photocopier... but that is another story for another time.
Your portrayal of all two characters is magnificent, as always, and your characterization is dead-on. My one complaint is that it's too short... your metaphors are always hauntingly beautiful, and you really need to write a best-seller before you graduate ^_~ I believe I'm going to write a couple more one-shots myself in this fandom before tackling any larger projects... even though I don't feel like writing one for everyone.
And you're about to find out how my reviews sometimes turn into a strange diary, because I went to the doctor today. Hooray for tendonitis and worker's compensation! The prescription topical thing I got is really gooey though.
Moving on. This makes me want to hug Reno. And Rufus. But stabbing myself in the eye with a functioning soldering iron whilst, and at the same time, watching the purchaser spray banana-scented disinfectant on the supervisor of product assembly would make me want to hug Rufus too. I'd find a way to relate it to him somehow. Lessee... I solder eletronics, being an automaton in an innovative company who reports to the intern who reports to the supervisor who reports to HR, who reports to Kip Fyfe, who is the CEO which is like the President of a company, which Rufus is one of. There you have it. That's why I have to hug him. And James Wilson.
I wonder how it would be if Wilson met Rufus... It would certainly be interesting. Or not interesting at all, simply full of so much squee factor that my head would explode and the purchaser would have to spray banana-scented disinfectant on me. Now House and Rufus... that would be interesting. Or Cuddy and Rufus, because they're both uppity, occasionally arrogant boss-men, except Cuddy is a woman, and Rufus is probably always arrogant. Another reason to hug him, to see exactly what might possably brush aside that lovely superior attitude of his that makes him wear white clothes and hop in and out of the Atkins headquarters. Desk-job + unwillingness-to-do-any-real-labor = um... energy and heat stored... uh... for winter. On his thighs.
Or wherever.
Anywho, even though this is a little shorter than my usual reviews, I should go while I still have some randomanity in me.
~Enjoy your first review from me. =D
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 Rizu Komesu 2006-04-10 . chapter 1Here, your review. And, it's really deep, I like it a lot Rini. Honestly, I think it's awesome, even if I'm not into FFVII Advent Children all that much. It deserves more attention than it received, in my honest opinion. Anyway...you know what? We should role-play something sometime, something original. Just so that we don't have to fight over what series to base it off of. |