|Reviews for Withheld Desires|
| Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 1
what ? i didn't understand anything -'-
| JimandArtie4ever 1/2/12 . chapter 1
A great story. Very well written.
| pronker 7/5/10 . chapter 1
Masterfully crafted, White Lady of Troy.
"he urged her to go just a little higher, a little bit further ... " was the most evocative part.
| Blonde Shadowcat 1/5/10 . chapter 1
HAHA! You totally meant for the reader to have their mind in the gutter the whole time! I love it!
| Eloin 11/25/08 . chapter 1
oyoyoy... Naughty! :-)
That was really funny, even for someone who avoids reading slash usually, I could clearly see where you were coming from. Lol...
Well written, and the twist is finely done!
| Oliv 7/18/08 . chapter 1
I love this little story. Nice summary, and you build the suspense nicely. It's not long, but it's just enough. Provided a good laugh.
| Andi-Scribbles 5/3/06 . chapter 1
Lol, I'm guessing you meant to make it sound dirtier than it is? Well, that was funny. Thanks for the little bit of Eowyn/Eomer!
| the green lama 4/10/06 . chapter 1
Wow! This was good!
Great summary, and very well written!
| quizzabella 4/10/06 . chapter 1
Oh dear, I had some very dodgy thoughts for a moment there! Very nicely done :)
| Lady Bluejay 4/10/06 . chapter 1
That was lovely. Great description. At firstI thought it might have been a bar of chocolate! Different age though. LBJ
| enchantedwriter72 4/9/06 . chapter 1
What a fun little story! Your discription is wonderful and you held me in such suspence wondering what it was she wanted! good job!
| Callie 4/9/06 . chapter 1
Um...yeah, wooden sword. I knew that.
You actualy had me going there for a minute.
For a moment there I thought this was going to turn into something...ahm...creepy.
| Elena 4/9/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, very good. What was your inspiration?