what ? i didn't understand anything -'-

A great story. Very well written.

Masterfully crafted, White Lady of Troy.

"he urged her to go just a little higher, a little bit further ... " was the most evocative part.

HAHA! You totally meant for the reader to have their mind in the gutter the whole time! I love it!

oyoyoy... Naughty! :-)

That was really funny, even for someone who avoids reading slash usually, I could clearly see where you were coming from. Lol...

Well written, and the twist is finely done!

I love this little story. Nice summary, and you build the suspense nicely. It's not long, but it's just enough. Provided a good laugh.

Lol, I'm guessing you meant to make it sound dirtier than it is? Well, that was funny. Thanks for the little bit of Eowyn/Eomer!

Wow! This was good!

Great summary, and very well written!

lama :D

Oh dear, I had some very dodgy thoughts for a moment there! Very nicely done :)

That was lovely. Great description. At firstI thought it might have been a bar of chocolate! Different age though. LBJ

What a fun little story! Your discription is wonderful and you held me in such suspence wondering what it was she wanted! good job!

Um...yeah, wooden sword. I knew that.

:)

You actualy had me going there for a minute.

For a moment there I thought this was going to turn into something...ahm...creepy.

Ooh, very good. What was your inspiration?