Oh, I liked it. Much better than the mood swingy, wrench throwing, screaming teary-eyed Winry I've grown accustomed to. Arakawa-sensei needed you on her writers team.

Pretty clever idea for a story!
I thought you did very well! Most fan fiction writers don't really get Winry's personality that good but I think you may have reached perfection.
True, it was a little short, but hey, I'm not complaining.
:)

this sounds like the conversation we had the other day over MSN...i have to know, is that what inspired you to write this? Maybe not, I don't know. Well anyways, thanks if it was. And I still like it if it wasn't. Well, I g2g. By Joy.

aww, I'm ready to cry! :*( It is so sad how Ed doesen't seem to notice how much Winry seems to love him. I've read a lot of touching things...wow. twas really good.