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| squid109 2008-05-03 ch 16,  | abuseOh oh, not a good idea, Beka. Not a good idea at all. Bit of a cliff hanger ending there. |
| Yvy 2008-05-02 ch 16, | abuseUh-oh, flash is never good. |
| ilexx 2008-05-01 ch 16, | abuseFinally an update. Long time no see on this one. Glad to see it back. |
| squid109 2008-01-25 ch 15, | abuseSounds like it's time for Harper and Trance to strike out on their own and find Beka |
| ilexx 2008-01-22 ch 15, | abuseThat Harper is doubting is regrettable, but okay. Trance though... that's not good at all. |
| ilexx 2007-11-05 ch 14, | abuseTyr's way of piling one problem on top of the other is somewhat infurating. What's he plotting now? |
| squid109 2007-10-20 ch 14, | abuseominous ending to this chapter. |
| ilexx 2007-08-14 ch 13, | abuseArrgh! TYR! He reconsiders, right? He better! And by the way, what the f* is Dylan doing all this time? @ยง**&%## |
| squid109 2007-08-11 ch 13, | abuseAh Tyr, the poster child for tough love. |
| ilexx 2007-07-18 ch 12, | abuseI could do with something slightly longer on this. I like the way you made her thoughts creep up on her. |
| squid109 2007-07-06 ch 12, | abuseNice but too short. |
| squid109 2007-05-19 ch 11, | abuseTyr actually sounding sympathetic. He must really be concerned. Normally he is the poster boy for 'tough love'. Still I always felt that the early season Tyr cared more for Harper than he let on, in a tough big brother sort of way. |
| ilexx 2007-05-19 ch 11, | abuseAs much as I hate to admit it: Tyr has a point! |
| Venus Smurf 2007-05-17 ch 11, | abuseAnother great chapter! Short, but wonderful. So glad you updated. |
| squid109 2007-04-14 ch 10, | abuseIf it's too good to be true it probably isn't. Beka is heading for trouble I can see it coming. |