Wonderful. Loce this fic. It's very touching.

Wow, that was pretty intense. So I guess you're implying that they slept with each other at the end then, right? A taste of Nostalgia? It seemed like a lustful attempt on Murrue's part. I liked this.

hmm, now there's an interesting speculation... for some reason, I can't really see Neo and Mwu as the same person, and it was rather interesting to see Murrue admitting that...

anyway, nice writing style, I really like the conversation between the two, esp about Neo's little team of toy soldiers.

awesome. are you going to make this multi-chapter?

Whoa. This is good. Oddly, it's almost exactly like a doujinshi I own..a very similar storyline.
But this is better than that comic *^ ^* Awesome!

This was...interesting. The ending was sad. Well-written though.

sounds quite dark...but it was possible in an alternate universe...anyway, it was nice! ^^