WOw. I really enjoyed reading this. I always liked angst stories, and I swear I could almost feel the pain myself. Great job, cheering up (if that's possible XD) someone who is pathetically sick right now.

What a sad story! The ending was lovely, though. I really enjoyed reading this.

This was beautiful, and sad. At first, I was a bit confused, but later everything finally made sense, so I read it again. Giving up her own life so that her two teammates could live is definitely something Sakura would do. I absolutely loved this.
The cherryblossoms were mentioned throughout the whole story, and I think it fitted very well.

There were some small mistakes, like shined instead of shone, but nothing major or annoying.

All in all, this is a true masterpiece, and definitely a favourite of mine.
~Marjolein

i read this when i was in fifth grade-back then i didn't have an account-and it just made me cry for an hour, no i'm serious! i love how the story ended, though kinda sad

I hate drama coz it kinda messes with your emotion then you feel all wheezy and uncomfortable...or maybe because i hate to cry XD

But anyway! i love it! great job dude! hope you do more!

(and i hope this won't happen in the last episode of naruto shippuuden XD, sorry i just can't take all the crying and sadness!)

^^V

...this was sort of confusing.
...so Sasuke went to fight itachi. Sakura tried to stop him. She failed. Four years later, Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke were fighting because?
...Why were they fighting?
...If it was to bring Sasuke back, then does that mean Sasuke didn't want to return?
...
And later, when Naruto and Sasuke fought, they had a shield surrounding her. They died. Sakura died trying to revive them, right?
...
I think I got it all..
...
I liked the ending...

it is not a snail but indeed a slug cuz in naruto shippuuden chiyo basama says tsunade is the slug lady princess any way when you say that he immersed himself in her wat exaclty do you mean? cuz naughty naughty things come up in my mind when plz say that tell me thanks BYEZ

a touching fanfic...:)

This is indeed a wonderful, tear-jerking work. I'm awfully moved by it, I dare say..
Simply amazing. *tear

...i luv your stories...seriously... tissues anyone - nice job xD

kOLZ

this is soo cute...

man, i love angsty stuff...

God, I already have a stuffed up nose and here you go making it so I can't breath out it at all. Your story was just so...sad.
But then happy at the end. I love it. I think this is the first story I'm actaully putting on my favs that counts.

Wow. Beautifully written. I think i cried a bit. Lovely work. :]

That's...so sad...

*wiping away tears* that was so angsty!! But i enjoyed reading it very much. You did a fantastic job!!