aw all finished! i best go find that sequal now! haha

aw! work now D: bo but yaay love it ^.^

ah ha! i found i didnt have to be in work till later! so i read on :P very good chapter, yous really can understand more of what hw feels. poor vincent. lets see if i can fit another chaper n before i have to go :P

o read up to this chapter so far and im loving it :P I like how youve written it with Vincnet explaining the story. Very well done :P
Hm i got work in a minute so i will have to stop reading D: but yess brillaint! :P

I really enjoyed this, and Vincent IS really cute in this. I did like his interior monologues throughout this, and he did manage to be quite humorous from time to time.
The use of first person is great as far as this story is concerned- its allows the reader to wonder what Tifa is thinking/feeling, although she is the sort of person to express it, most of the time!
The only thing I can really fault you on is the occasional spelling error.
Ciao

I enjoy your non-conventional approach to the story line here, and Vincent is rather too much in character (He's very frustratingly introverted, so well done)
I also particularly enjoyed the use of 'befuddled'

Very good start. I like this!

Hello from the future. I just read this story and am very moved by it--also struck by how similar Vincent's and Cloud's Hojo experiences co-incide. And since I am in the future, I not only know the Advent Children's story but it's remake into AC Complete. The Vincent story you wrote still holds, though Cloud's relationship to Tifa takes a different twist...Thank you for this story--and since I am in the future, thank you for the sequel, which I read earlier today. mc

This is really awesome! I love how you explored Vincent's character.

... amazing fic. Absolutely amazing.

Kudos!

Hehe, maybe a little to complain about some the language choices (Vincent occasionally sounds rather unintentionally immature), but the idea of Marlene interrupting his brooding session is very funny.

Thank you so much for putting all the time and effort into writing this piece; I'm really glad I got a chance to read this.

Hello.
I don't really know what to say.
I'm not good at expressing how much I liked something.
But...I just wanted to say that this was amazing.
I commend you.
Thank you for an amazing story.

400!

The translation is over, my dear! I'll translate you the reviews as soon as I can, but I wanted to tell you this.

:]

You already know what I think of this story, I suppose– I just love this Vincent. Screw DoC.

(stupid comment is stupid)

Ah... so close to review 400. ::pouts:: I want to be #400. Lol. Oh well. This story was absolutely awesome. So awesome that I'm like... wow. Overall, you did a great job pulling off as Vincent in first person.