these are good, i'd like more of them.

wow,that's all i can say at the moment! i was deeply moved by your work. Each poem was breathtaking and bittersweet! i love the symbolizm that you have used in many of them!! This pairing has always been my fav, and you brough out all the angles, and truth. Very powerful! thank you for writing this i enjoyed reading your work!!

Aw, that was depressing! Ayame angsting over Yuki always really gets to me. I've never ever been able to write about it. This was very well-written, a bit like a fairy tale...nice job!

I was mildly confused by this, since some of your statements were a little contradictory. Could be just me, I've had a long, long day and my brain is on the dead side. The reason I was confused is you say at first that he DOESN'T look at the sky, but then it sounds like he does it often but what he's doing when he does is misinterpreted...I'm sure it makes sense somehow. I was just confused. Aside from that, it was really good. The writing style was very pretty, and while I'm not a huge fan of this couple (don't dislike it or anything, I just never THOUGHT of it!) I'm starting to see where you're coming from! The haiku was also a really nice one, who's it by? Your interpretation was cool, too. Good job over all! And I'm sorry for babbling on so much. ^^;

Lovely. You write these drabbles with as much tenderness as one would a master painting. The infinite care and thought you put into each piece is apparent, and gives them the touch that seperates literature from stories. -hug!- a thousand praises to you, my dear!

How sad

Oh... I'm not sure whether to cry or laugh, but either way this is very emotion-rending. And I am exceedingly pleased that you're alive.

lol...it lives...

One can only hope. Great story, it's one of my favorites. I hope the next chapter will come very soon

About time he did!

Poor Aaya, that's so true

aw so sweet

These ones are so heartbreakingly beautiful!

Lovely. Especially the first two. Have I mentioned how much I adore your writing?

Loved this last chapter specially "Drowning". Heart-breakingly beautiful. Congrats.