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i donno wat to say about that
it was kinda good i guess

nice story... cute, sweet & funny... really liked it... good work...

It's suddenly hot here in my place! Lol XDD

i liked it! :D
actually,.,. i loved RyoSaku in here so much! ;D
but since i'm not a fan of yaoi,.,. (i dont like it)
i didnt enjoy that part,.,. hehehe
still i love your writing! ;) (RyoSaku forever!) :)

I never knew you liked B2B action so much.
And, you seem very scientific with some of your wordings
(ie. Hormones taking over) hm. If i didn't know, I'd bet you're majoring in a science course. ;)
Of course, that's my opinion only. I wouldn't know.

Anyway, i think tezuka's straight. keep him straight for me please. :) don't give him action of the 3rd kind.

i like it! especially the ryosaku moments.

nya

kawai

nya! hope you could write more ryoma/sakuno fic

i think ive read this already... i dunno BUT ITS GR8! so kawaii!! ^0^ i love them two!

I loved this so much! You managed to keep it cute, whilst having a steamy hot make out session in there too! Who knew that was possible!

AND you had Golden Pair and Tezuka/Fuji in there too, which I also love! Great job!

KYA! SO KAWAII! I love it, are you planning to have a sequel, PLEASE do it's really great and it's written very well.

this is written very well, thank you for thinking of it! I love the idea of those two actually making out in the library just to have the team members interrupt them.
however, there are a few parts that i thought were a little iffy.
first, having the whole conversation on the phone with the regulars was a cute idea, but then adding all of the other pairings in too gets a little overwhelming and it sort of strays away from the main ryosaku theme. but that's just me.
second, i got this tiny feeling that ryoma is just hooking up with sakuno because he just likes kissing her :( i didn't feel the love.
and third, it was pretty funny, yet unrealistic that the librarian would just glance around and then bolt the door shut. hahahah that makes it so easy to get locked in!

anyway, very cute story. i really love the beginning where you're basically in ryoma's pov and you can see the gradual build-up to the big kiss-o-rama.
this definitely deserves more reviews :)

i love it!

Great loved it so cute!^_^

if u wanna make it longer i dun mind but hopefully u could write a sequel on this.. xD