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Reviews For: Seeing Me

Bonasera
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abusethis story were soo sweet and cute:)
LOVED IT :P
mj0621
2006-07-07
ch 1,
abuseeik! a masterpiece I tell ya!:) nice...

-mj(wgf)
Crazy Victoria
2006-06-03
ch 1,
abuseGah! You rock! I just got your review and thought 'Hey, let's go see what she's written' and it was THIS! I loved this. Loved, loved, loved.
Vic
The Diamond Sorceress
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseNice job! Good capture of the characters, and nice interactions. My only complaint would be your verb tenses--you're switching between past and present a lot, and it gets distracting. Other than that, good plotline, and nice work with the depth of emotion...

~ DS
Mellie Erdmann
2006-04-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was soo cute!
I loved it.
Mellie.
Cora Clavia
2006-04-13
ch 1,
abuseAbsolutely adorable.
Little Miss Sorrow
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful Caroline! you keep the cahracters in cahracrer, and you cramp so much emotions in. My eyes are glued to the screen.
fruitbat00
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseYou may not have written in a while but I dont think you have lost your touch. I loved this. I hope you will consider writing more Mac and Stella.
Charmed-Heiress
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseAww! Absolutely beautiful fic, I hope you write more soon!
Volonta forte
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abuseUtterly gorgeous! You've captured Stella perfectly! Along with Mac as well! I think the song fits this perfectly! Keep up your god work!
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