that was cute and it didnt suck at all...

AW SSO CUTE!!

this was so swet

very nice story.. love it.. the letter was touching too..

very sweet. i luv it.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU SUCK?!?!?!?
I thought it was wonderful!
And good luck with your boyfriend...er...fiance?

I was sweet. Aw

aww honey! good luck with your man. :)
this is sweet and beautiful. I cried! and to think it was kinda like a true life expierience... its just mind blowing. i enjoy your writing so much. Look forward to future stories!

~*~ ambie ~*~

that was a cute story and you do fluff just fine don't put yourself down it's not healthy . . . i should know

continue writin and i too wish you have tons of children if you want them that is ;)

GOOD LUCK!!^_^ HOPE YOU HAVE TONS OF KIDS!!^_^