*gasp* that was awsome!

*hugs* thanks for sharing this with us.

*laugh* as for lengh requirements i tend to over do them too. Once i had to write a 1 page myth for school and it became 7 chapters and 200 pages xD

Glad you posted it on its own cause i usually dont have time and patience for drabbles. I usually ignore them when i see them for that very reason. That and ive had bad expierences with those xD
OMG!! You should write more! :O that was uberly amazing.
great ending, i gotta say. I love his recovery from the darkness. Its also really visiual though Hyourinmaru is twice as large as Hitsugaya. *looking at manga* hmm though he's still kind of short for a dragon xD *laugh* thanks!! :D

I love this story, I love the way you look at how Hitsugaya's zanpakato would look and described how it would act! I basicly love the interpretation!

-Sapphire Star

super great. ^_^

Hey,

A wee bit thick, but good all the same. I like it anyway ^__^

Umm, loved Hitsugaya slipping off from the cold and arrogance, and his urgency to regain just that.

Nice ending.. we all await the answer.
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wow...nice...i luv hitsugaya! X3

~Tsuki-chan

Yay! More Hitsugaya fic. I'm so glad to read this. I actually wanted to write a short piece of him waking up, but NOW I DON'T HAVE TO! mwahahahaha. I love how Hyourinmaru handles Hitsugaya. Great job! Yay hitsulove!

Ha! I'm finally reviewing this piece! XD

Like I told you before, I absolutely loved this story. It's such a marvelous insight into Hitsugaya's character, and I really enjoyed your portrayal of Hyourinmaru. I felt like I was easily pulled into the vivid imagery of the piece, and I absolutely loved every minute of it. Gotta love angst-fests, I tell you! :D (No, I do mean that seriously! I'm a total angst-monger, hehehe.)

Thank you so much for sharing it with us! Yay for Hitsu-chan! Yay for Kellen's Bleach plot bunnies! *does a little dance* XD

Gorgeous. Absolutely so. I love the imagery of tha tcold place, and Hyourinmaru and Hitsugaya are beautifully in character.

Now for the non-literate bit. xD
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O_O
Best Shirou-chan fic I ever read

"He owed them his life, as worthless as he thought it was."

I think that line is really key, not only to the story, but to his Hitsugaya's basic character. From the first time we see him to the last, he is always the one doing for others, or at least trying to. What that type of person rarely realizes is how much others need them, because of who they are rather than for what they do. Even though what they do is a result of who they are. Okay, I'm not making any sense. But you did, in the story, so that's okay! :)

I do think coming back would have been a hard choice for him, after having failed so hugely. And I like the thought that Hyourinamru would have a hand in putting him back on the right path.

Yay, more Hitsugaya goodness! Hopefully there's still more to come. :)

Yay! I'm the first to review! Anyway, I liked your story! It's very well written. I must admit, I almost forgot about the battle Hitsugaya must have gone through before he was back to normal. We're still waiting on Hinamori, though. But enough of my rambling. Good job!

that was cool...hyoinmaru really was intresting...

You have to continue this.
I think it would make a very interesting multi-chaptered story.