 Kagome N Bankotsu 4 ever 2009-10-24 . chapter 1Very nicely put. *giggles8 Angry sex can be awesome! *winks* |
 Surviving Insanity 2008-10-15 . chapter 1That is so ** great. Lol. I almost burst out laughing. That is not good because it could have woken someone up. |
 madmiko 2007-12-01 . chapter 1Hoo hoo! That was SOME hissy fit she was throwing. And Bankotsu was just enjoying it all. LOL!! Then, when she said she saw him kiss someone else, I was ready to throw something at him, too. I just about died laughing when he told her it was his gay friend, Jak, and she was shocked at the thought that "You're gay?!!?" That was great! This is a cute little piece. |
 Yuti-Chan 2007-09-25 . chapter 1Very funny and cute! |
 Amphibious Draculina 2006-09-13 . chapter 1lol |
 Kisskitty 2006-05-28 . chapter 1Ha! That was too cute. |
 DreamBeamz 2006-05-20 . chapter 1Awesome chapter! *sigh* |
 Supersticiousmonkey89 2006-05-06 . chapter 1That was relly good, though for a moment there I though Bankostu was Kagome and she was arguing with Kikyo... ^^ Ah well. Also, in the beginning, I was wondering how a person's hand can twitch if it's on their waist.
And then there is the whole "bittersweet pout," I love how you describe things so in detail, but that was kind off. Why would it be bittersweet if she were angry? Maybe 'icy' or 'quivering' would work better?
Beautiful how you compared Kagome to a cat, though it's kind of confusing at first. I thought she was a demon for a minute there...
O and the whole 'scrambled look jigsawed' simply brilliant.
Your wit is terribly infectious. I hope you write another story soon, this was wonderfully done. |
 praying-cherry-blossom 2006-04-19 . chapter 1heyy r u gonna continue it?? hope you will latur! |
 Squishy Penguin 2006-04-18 . chapter 1Great Fic! |
 Kage Youkai 2006-04-13 . chapter 1Ha...That was pretty good. I thought you'd do the 'So sick' because that's the only Ne-yo song I've heard but that was a good story. Is Kagome a demon or what? |
 sessmaruspunk 2006-04-13 . chapter 1Hey that was great and it was funny also in its own way. well you did a great job and keep it up. |
 Kirri Kitty 2006-04-11 . chapter 1 hey that was funny... update soon even on that soldier boy if you can and any other ones you have is tis one going to be updatd or is it finished? thank you come agai...soon.. bye! |
 Kage Otome 2006-04-11 . chapter 1Amusing, it appeals to my twisted sense of humor. *grins* Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you come out with next. |
 darkenedmoonlightflame 2006-04-10 . chapter 1(laughs) Hnn! That was cute. Very nice, how you inserted (bad pun) the reader into Bankotsu's viewpoint. His pet names for Kagome were hilarious. I'm happy that this did connect to Junsei Ai, though, because the plotline made more sense that way. (Gets rid of the 'how did they get together in the first place?' question.)
Well, I loved the one shot, and once more I'm not disappointed, SangOtaku6!
Ja ne,
o.O.o.O darkenedmoonlightflame O.o.O.o
And company. My adorably annoying muses. |