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Kagome N Bankotsu 4 ever
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Very nicely put. *giggles8 Angry sex can be awesome! *winks*
Surviving Insanity
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
That is so ** great. Lol. I almost burst out laughing. That is not good because it could have woken someone up.
madmiko
2007-12-01 . chapter 1
Hoo hoo! That was SOME hissy fit she was throwing. And Bankotsu was just enjoying it all. LOL!! Then, when she said she saw him kiss someone else, I was ready to throw something at him, too. I just about died laughing when he told her it was his gay friend, Jak, and she was shocked at the thought that "You're gay?!!?" That was great! This is a cute little piece.
Yuti-Chan
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
Very funny and cute!
Amphibious Draculina
2006-09-13 . chapter 1
lol
Kisskitty
2006-05-28 . chapter 1
Ha! That was too cute.
DreamBeamz
2006-05-20 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter! *sigh*
Supersticiousmonkey89
2006-05-06 . chapter 1
That was relly good, though for a moment there I though Bankostu was Kagome and she was arguing with Kikyo... ^^ Ah well. Also, in the beginning, I was wondering how a person's hand can twitch if it's on their waist.
And then there is the whole "bittersweet pout," I love how you describe things so in detail, but that was kind off. Why would it be bittersweet if she were angry? Maybe 'icy' or 'quivering' would work better?
Beautiful how you compared Kagome to a cat, though it's kind of confusing at first. I thought she was a demon for a minute there...
O and the whole 'scrambled look jigsawed' simply brilliant.
Your wit is terribly infectious. I hope you write another story soon, this was wonderfully done.
praying-cherry-blossom
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
heyy r u gonna continue it?? hope you will latur!
Squishy Penguin
2006-04-18 . chapter 1
Great Fic!
Kage Youkai
2006-04-13 . chapter 1
Ha...That was pretty good. I thought you'd do the 'So sick' because that's the only Ne-yo song I've heard but that was a good story. Is Kagome a demon or what?
sessmaruspunk
2006-04-13 . chapter 1
Hey that was great and it was funny also in its own way. well you did a great job and keep it up.
Kirri Kitty
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
hey that was funny... update soon even on that soldier boy if you can and any other ones you have is tis one going to be updatd or is it finished? thank you come agai...soon.. bye!
Kage Otome
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
Amusing, it appeals to my twisted sense of humor. *grins* Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you come out with next.
darkenedmoonlightflame
2006-04-10 . chapter 1
(laughs) Hnn! That was cute. Very nice, how you inserted (bad pun) the reader into Bankotsu's viewpoint. His pet names for Kagome were hilarious. I'm happy that this did connect to Junsei Ai, though, because the plotline made more sense that way. (Gets rid of the 'how did they get together in the first place?' question.)
Well, I loved the one shot, and once more I'm not disappointed, SangOtaku6!

Ja ne,
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And company. My adorably annoying muses.
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