Nice poems. I kept meaning to read them, but never got to it until now. I like how you phrased things. It wasn't at all akward like mine sometimes are. It makes you feel bad for Axel, not that I didn't before. He's one of my favorite characters from KH2, along with Riku and Demyx(he's hilarious). It must not be fun to be a nobody. People like Axel, Roxas, and Demyx definately don't seem happy; that's for sure.

Anyways, the poems were great. I hope to see more soon!

Tomono: We regret to inform you that Mother is in her room crying, and so there will be no real review.
Zanza: She did however leave this note.
Soryu: Did she?
Zanza: Yes.
Tomono: (snatches it) "To Tokiya. How dare you. I was doing so well and then you went and depressed me. I am so depressed I don't even care that there was supposed to be a question mark in the second sentence. And I'm the grammar police. OH, ED, HUG ME!"
Itsuki: Eew, who would want Ed hugging them?
Tomono: She's short, she has red hair, she has green eyes...
Maki: ITSUKI...
Tomono: And she wields a sword.
Itsuki: Oh, sh--
Maki: I don't mean to sound like Yume, but...DIE, **, DIE!
Soryu/Zanza: WHOA...
Tomono: (bows) Thank you for taking your time to read this non-review from Mother. Hopefully Ed will cheer her up...see you later.

._. This was sad. It was sad. But it was also sweet and a little sappy...
But hey. I'm in a forgiving mood. I just had ice cream. (Should I have ice cream if I'm sick...?)
Personally I think it leaned toward AkuRoku. And there is nothing wrong with that! (hug) You have unlimited access to the cookie jar for the next ten minutes, and then I'm closing it again because I love me some cookies. w00t.

This is so...moving ;_; Axel's pain is so terrible, his burden so great, and I think you captured that essence perfectly in both of your lovely poems. Personally, I think you should put a melody to these. They'd make fabulous songs ^^

Lovely poem, I don't own, nor have I ever played Kingdom Hearts 2, but that doesn't distract from the fact that the poem is great. Poor Axel feels that he's going to disappear without his friend, he's struggling with loneliness, but he ain't alone, and yet he is alone, so very alone.

I think you captured Axel very well indeed! It made perfect sense to me and agree with your view on Axel's & Roxas's friendship. ^_^

That was deep. Meaningful. I could just feel the emotion when I read the last two lines the second time through. The whole thing made my heart beat faster. It's like you can...feel what Axel's going through. Wonderful poem...Wonderful.

Go you! I think you captured Axel's personality well. If you think of anymore poems like this, could you update? You could just do a collection of poems with similar themes or whatever. But, yeah, ya did good!

T_T Axel and Roxas are so awesome.
... T_T this poem is so awesome.

Really good. Sounds like something Axel probably thought up before he finally faded away. The poor guy x.x;

Cool...