A great story. Very good.

Pal, your story is awesome.
So I have a question.
I`m member of the german fanfic website "fanfiktion.de".
Would you allow me to translate your story in German, so that my fellow countrymen could enjoy this one-shot too?
Naturally I will accentuate you as the author of this story und " as the source of my discovery.

I love this story.
The clones are the greatest.
What a shame that this "Total War" thing never came.

Sweet! I've read your story on and I think it's brilliant! You just need to get to chapter 3 now! I suggest having the Exile involved.

Love it. I always felt how it was slightly...wrong for the clones, who had been fighting side by side with the Jedi for so long, would suddenly just take an order to gun them down without any protest.

Might I inquire where this Total War story is? I'm assuming its still in the works since I cannot find it in your profile page. Anyways, thanks for the excellent read!

Cool story. I like your alternate take on Order 66. Think you did the relations between the Jedi and the clones really well.

This was a very interesting take on Order 66. The only thing that I am left to wonder is what is this "Total War" storyline that you wrote about in the summary and in the author's note in the beginning of the story? I went to your profile to look and I didn't find anything that went by that name. Is it a story that you plan to write in the future? If so, it would be a story that I would be interested in reading. I would especially like to read it so that I can learn more about the relationship between Vauris and Zaran, and learn how Anakin was on Utapau with Obi-wan when in canon Anakin was on Coruscant.

That's cool.

I like this. Though I, apparently like others, am unable to locate this "Total War" story you speak of. I would definitely like to read it. Does it exist? Please tell me.

I'm writing a story like this.

But truthfully, I think yours is better. The emotion both the clone troopers and Jedi had got me into this story really quickly.

(Deactivating her lightsaber, Aayla turned to see several of Bly’s lieutenants kneeling around their fallen commander. One trooper had taken his helmet off, and the expression on his face caused Aayla’s vision to swim with tears.)

That line was SO greatly described. I'm looking forward to the rest, if there is any more to this.

Alpha-1337? LOL!

this was good

It's so intriguing! I can't find your story 'Total War' anywhere though. Are you still writing it?

oh my god that was awesome when are you writing the sequal and quick question will the clones loyal to the jedi join the rebellion or start it

Great story. Looking forward to more.

Just one little mistake: Ki-Adi-Mundi was on Mygeeto & Kit Fisto was killed on Coruscant by Palpatine.

Or is this part of your story?