Naki should've stayed dead! Sora and Matt should go DIE! Tohru's Digimon should be reborn and be happy! Tai should be happy with his wife, or should've ended up with Sora.

You houldn't have had Tai remembering a hook from Matt since Matt couldn't beat a girl. He's a weakling!

DEATH 2 this story! But at least Tai was the narrator at the end and not idiot TK!

DEATH 2 SORATO!

Kari is NOT smarter than Tai. She's a little weakling. And if she was smarter, she wouldn't even be talking with the slutty Sora or tosser Matt! She's a crappy little Sister to Tai! He deserves a better sister than Kari! Friendship and Love! What a joke! Wish Sora had died when she fell with her annoying Digimon!

Sora should also keep her nose out of Tai's business! So should Ishida!

I can't believe you're being so rude with Tai's character! Matt was the best friend of Tai, and he betrayed him!

Izzy shouldn't have taken Takenouchi's sushi! It may have her horrid germs all over it!

Takenouchi's got NO right to boss Tai around!

Nyaromon doesn't have claws and is not scary in any form. She's just a little pussy!

All in all another crap chapter! I don't like this story. I don't like this OC crappy character! I don't like how slutty Takenouchi behaves with Tai and Matt! She doesn't deserve either guy! And Matt doesn't deserve anyone after he betrayed Tai! DEATH 2 Sorato & their fans!

Damn you for putting slutty Sorato in it!

Especially since I heard they were divorced. Sorato is SICK!

DEATH 2 SORATO & FANS OF SORATO!

This is a very beautiful story.

Thanks for sharing this to the world. I love how well you described the original digidestineds and the regular people.

Think there will be a sequel?

sweet story! once again something that very, very, very few people write with the "future" in mind instead of their present figures!

Nice. Ten Chapters, short ones at that, and you spun out a really good story with it. Well done.

*Shakes head in awe* Amazing... I can't believe that it's possible for somebody to write something this amazing...

Found this on a C2 community. And I have to say that was an amazing story. I really did love it. There was a very well kept balance between humour and action. And I really like how you've portrayed the digidestined. I also really like Naki. It must have been hard to be the only child in the WORLD not to have a digimon, but it's interesting that the person that started the chain was her own mother. Naki & Skull Greymon were incredibly freaky, and added much depth to the story. All the explanations about the crests, digivices and such were explained with utmost detail. And the ending really set the whole thing off. It was really nice how you intertwined the last words of season 2 with the happy ending of Tohru and Naki. Was Naki's partner a Biyomon then? Or something else? Another thing we never find out is whether the original intention of Naki - to stop digimon fighting - was actually fulfilled, but since Daemon was probably influencing her I guess she never got to fulfill her role. But I'm glad she finally got a partner in the end up. Your fic was incredibly satisfying to read, and I also liked how it wasn't too long but wasn't too short also. I'm really glad I found it. All the best and good luck in the future. -Gerjo

*applauds* Excellent, short but great. Love how ya tied in past episodes/bits. That was GREAT!

Sk-sk-skul... Lgreymon? Good 'battle' scenes, you've really captured the spirit of sibling rivalry...

Good god... By the way, no offence or anything but you made two typos, it's not Owikawa just Oikawa, and I think you meant here not hear.

That was soooo good! And sad too! I loved it and you kept the cannon lives very nicely with the fic. I didn't mind the Sorato/Taiora part because it worked out bittersweetly. Good job and excellent characterization!

Wow...this was a really sensationals ending. I was wondering how some things were going to end, but you handled them well. Some parts were easy to figure out, but hey, the rest makes up for those rare and few parts.

Er...I don't think that's possible. I'm not 100% percent sure, but that needs to be checked up on.

These are some interseting theories you're throwing around. Good thing they could all possible work, or someone might have you for breakfast. _