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Yorke0593
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abuseThe assignment part was good, but the all dialogue phone call was too choppy and you made Joey out to be a mess and Dawson to be a jerk!
Docholiday024
2006-09-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great start to a story. All you have to do is remember it is Dawson and Joey, add some angst between them. Put Joey back with Pacey for awhile. Let Dawson date some one from L.A.. Just remember to do what the writers of the show couldn't. Don't sell out. They set them up as soul-mates through out the entire show, only to end it with Joey and Pacey together, cop-out. Feel free to email me and we can talk more about it.
JMB
2006-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice fic, kind of sad though. I hope you continue it and show them hopefully getting back together.
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