Oh...now what?

Must sleep.

Will find out in morning.

Ok your rightthe ending was not all that good. A wasy you can change it is write a sequalit would ez & you would not have to change the story. 2 the story was nto confuningf @ all i really enjoyed it. plus with teh padawan/teacher thing the students are usually further in a age difference than l/t were. I think the only thing i did not like in the story is Luke almost seemed to be on a rebound for mara. He just told T (sry I do nto remember how to spell her name) that he loved her than what seemed like a few weeks later he was telling Mara that he loved her & was engaged to her. that is the ONLY thing (other than the ending) that i had a problem with.

no offence but that was kinda cheezie you could of/should made/make the chapter longer and more romantic he is proposing after all!

Er, right. You've probably seen me haunting some of your other works. I finished this and found it very enjoyable. Glad you could give this L/M fic to the world

I like the ending. you set yourself up for a sequel... *clears throat loudly* a SEQUEL... please?

I really do like this story, so those of you who dont, well, I cant say what I'll do to you, but it wont be pretty...

lol! That was such a good story! You really have talent and I hope you keep writing! I love how you had Anakin come back to the light side.

Good story. I enjoyed it. You must not be a guy, because guys never apologise, and you're doing way too much of it! The next time you feel the urge to apologise for nothing, have pride in yourself and stop!

Horrors. How will Luke and Mara escape? Did ya have to kill off a new character already? Sheesh...I was just getting use to her fiestiness. MORE PLEASE!

Oh, geez! I feel like an idiot! I reviewed the wrong story. (Don't get me wrong I like this story too. Otherwise I wouldn't have posted a review here at all, even if it is the wrong one. :) Although I'm still waiting to see how this story turns out.) But my review is a little wrong for this story. (chapters 16-17?)

This is good. I can't wait to see what happens next. There is going to be more right?

its a little confusing, but first chapters are sometimes when you are setting up a story. keep going