 Rashock 2007-09-18 . chapter 8Excellent Greed Fanfic my only wish is to know how it ends your idea is better then most |
 Alex Warlorn 2006-10-05 . chapter 8Yea, I always thought it was odd now some Sin's nick names matched while others decidedly didn't. Greed and Axel (from Kingdom Hearts) are both interesting characters, since they both in theory have nothing that makes him human except their apperance, yet, in the end they make some very human choices. |
 Alex Warlorn 2006-10-05 . chapter 5While Dante it's clear did lie to the sins, Envy taunted Al by saying that he KNEW Dante had been decieving them and didn't care about being human, he just wanted humanity as a whole to suffer. |
 crimson1215 2006-09-16 . chapter 8please update i really like this story |
 Shadowlover101 2006-09-13 . chapter 8This story is awesome. The parts making fun of Lust's attacks were funny. I hope you'll continue! |
 PhinalPhantasy 2006-07-10 . chapter 8Hey great update. I love the way you protray the rivalries between the Homunculi. I can't wait to see what's next. |
 Rin-neechan 2006-07-08 . chapter 8hahaha!! nice comic relief from the rest of the sad chapters. I like it. You've already got a good rivalry going between Greed and Envy and I'd like to see you fold it out some more.
Don't ever worry too much about how long it takes you post. I'll always be reading and as a writer myself I understand that things get in the way and you don't always have as much time as you'd like to write. School, jobs, homework, family and just plain "i don't know what to write next" will come around a lot, but your writing is worth waiting for.
Keep it up! |
 TyrantFlame 2006-07-05 . chapter 8Wow... for trying out a thoery on how they find out what their powers are, i'm pretty impressed by how funny it looked along the way... O.O;;
I like it, nonetheless! ^_^ Keep it up, I'll still be reading and I'm waiting for more! Can you type faster?? ^^;;
I wonder what kind of stuff they'll be pulling next... |
 Rochelle the Echidna 2006-07-04 . chapter 8I love Greed's theory of how they have their powers... funny ^_^... I still say his power's the most useful of all... keep the story comin'! |
 Chrosis 2006-06-13 . chapter 7I can't stand it when people use the homunculi and don't know how their powers work...
Envy: It's not explained, but I'm guessing, that's right, GUESSING, that Envy's powers deal in genetics.
Gluttony: In the manga he was a sort of artificial gate thing, and had an infinite amount of space in his stomach and for some reason never had to take a crap.
Lust: Never explained, but I think she has powers similar to Greed'sthe way she can extend her nails through steel, such as Alphonse.
Greed: Here's the fun one, because he totally explains it. He can change his skin to supercompressed carbon, making it harder than diamonds. As I'm sure you know, it also makes him one ugly SOB. |
 PhinalPhantasy 2006-06-10 . chapter 7Hey I understand about the school work piling up, it's kept me from updating quite a few times though. I'm sure your next chapter will be worth the wait. |
 Domenic 2006-05-09 . chapter 6...Well, did not expect to see Hoenheim again! O_o/^_^
Liked his re-entry, his general outrage at Dante, his own personal guilt...but I just love, LOVE when Greed steps up and tries to cheer him up. ^_^ It's so delightfully in-character, Greed WOULD do that. ;) Also like how Hoenheim reacts, gratified in small, but significant ways, and being all cryptic about Greed's past as he gives him the glasses. (Gotta love Cryptic!Hoenheim. *smirk*)
...It's very hard to articulate all my good feelings about this chapter--I'll just sum it up and say this was incredible, and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Rin-neechan 2006-05-04 . chapter 6YAY! Greed's got his sunglasses!! |
 TyrantFlame 2006-05-04 . chapter 6OMG, DAT'S SO CUTE! ^_^
Greed's so adorable here! And to think he was just reborn!! Do continue some more! I wanna see more~! |
 PhinalPhantasy 2006-05-04 . chapter 6Nice addition, I'm definately keeping my eye on this story. Keep up the good work. |