that was fan-**-tastic, if i do say so myself. the ending made me shed a few tears and wail. you deserve to have my virtual babies. please. do so xD

Wah. That was so beautiful and sad... wah. Great story. Now I need to find a tissue box.
=')

it's quite good! I particulary love the ending! I'm so happy you didn't turn Voldemort in some sappy lovesick puppy all of a sudden so he and Harry had a Happy Ending! Really! You've made a wonderful job!

God...
you just made me cry! That is not something that I normaly do ^^ I think it is not necesary to say that I really (<--understatement) liked this story!
xxooxx

This story was really great. It was sad when they died in the end, but I suppose with the way their relationship was playing out their wasn't another ending that would have worked near as well.
Hope to read more from you in the future.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was short and to the point and that was exactly what I was looking for. Sometimes it is nice to have a long story, but sometimes there is absolutely no need for page filling scenes when everything is said.

I also very much liked the ending. For me there is a slight hint that Voldemort in fact did love Harry in a certain way. I don't know if you intended that or not, but I like it^^; and I like it even more because it is more like an innuendo than anything else.

Additionally, I found the poems at the beginning of each chapter very good. They fit perfectly to the story and what was happening.

Now I have to take a look at you other stories.^^

Greetings,
Severnaya

I love it.

Love the ending and written brilliantly. I love the way he gradually falls in love with Him, severus' part and the ending. the "good bloody job" was good.

Didn't like? Show harrys funeral? Dunno.

The poem at the beginning were a nice touch. Did yu write it yourself?

Slash was awesome especially the build up! :]

I never thought that a love story with this pairing could be so poignant and quietly beatiful and still be so true to the nature of the characters. I'm awed... and a little humbled. Thank you.

Bloody! Brilliant!

Take that Tom. I guess voldemort never really understood love and he certainly paid for underestimating it.

omg, how i sobbed, like a smll child who has been told Santa isn't real. That was so beautiful, thank you. :)

i agree with snape, except for the fact i am praising you instead, bloody good job.

Wow.

Incredibly realistic. I'm not a big LVHP fan, but this story is remarkable for its attention to detail, natural progression of plot and believable characterizations.

The only loophole I spotted (and I could be wrong) was that Voldemort didn't find out about Harry's Snape-caper via Legilimency (as he did with Harry upon capture) or via a pissy Lucius.

What kind of cruel sad twisted wrong ending was that! I'm flippen speechless I can't believe you did tha! Holy shite! That was mean! But gottah say the story was good even if it was written like three years ago... Anyways
Yep that was a mean ending you had better have alternate endings on your profile!
- wcs(: