Aw! I love it, it's so sweet! Good dribble!

Nice job! Beautifully written!

Best Wishes
Holli x

You are such a sap, Fray!

But that's why I love your writings.

This is a really good drabble.

And I absolutely love the ending. XD *SQUEE*

*favourites!*

Wow, wonderful fic. I loved the first paragraph and the ending, too, and Sirius saying he could never say 'I love you'. Just wonderful. Great job!
- Gaby

That was excellent! :)

Christ. I actually have tears in my eyes. And this was absolutely brilliant. Absolutely. I can't even comment on everything I liked, because I'm too choked up with emotion - over a freaking little drabble. Whoa. Okay. Let me just compose myself, so I can tell you that the other reason I cannot illuminate for you precisely *what* was so incredibly brilliant is because the whole thing was absolutely amazing. Everything. And there wasn't really anything I can complain to you about, either. I am so glad I had this half hour off to come and read these couple stories, because sometimes it is incredibly difficult to find such quality work. I really am impressed you. This is slash well done, and with the right dose of each element.
Just... WoW.

In all admiration,
Christina

Aw...such a sweet little slash! This was really good; I laughed out loud at the scene with Peter. Great job!

Meh, I'm not one for Sirius/Remus.

But I am a definite fan of your writing...man you could write my school lunch schedule and i'd been reading it attentively, lord!

Okay, beside my utter stupidness, this was very very very well written...the emotions were expressed with a certain passion...so basically you rule!

Paddy

Oh...that's so sad...I swear if I had been listening to that song while reading this I would've cried...everything about it is just beautiful...the longing, the neediness, the heartbreak...and Tonks at the end, that was even sadder because he can't love her like he loved Sirius...T_T

I'm going to squash my review for both your chapters in this one go, okay? Okay.

First of all, I was quite impressed with chapter one-especially by your choice of perspective. People hardly choose to write in second-person and when they do, it often comes out awkward. However, for this chapter, it was very effective and drew me into the story. Your style of writing is also rapidly growing on me. As for the story itself, it was very lovely; it's the exact kind of mixture between sweet, bitter, and sadness that leaves me smiling and wanting more. Only little problem: several typos here and there. Nothing serious though. (Sorry, I'm just one of those people that are nitty picky about spelling x)

I'd have to say that chapter two was also a nice read, but it didn't impress me as much as chapter one. Don't get me wrong though-I enjoyed them both immensely. But I suppose, possibly because the idea and layout for the second chapter isn't horribly original, it didn't grab my attention as much as the first one did. Again, it was still a good chapter. And your typos have disappeared! Hurray! :)

I'm hoping to see lots more from you and expect me to dig through all your stuff in the next few days. That said, sorry for the long review and I really hope my comments have helped (or entertained) in some way or another. Toodles!

Wow! This is like you said a really good dribble. Not only that, the way you wrotw your point of view was flawless. It really pulled me in the story. Maybe you could chapter it? Lovely ficlet all the same!

XoXo
Emmy

Hello hon,
This is a beautiful story, very well written indeed. with just enough emotion to make it believable, but not like all those terrible fics you see around. EG: "OH, but yah... Like... like, I LuV YOUSE!" I've read some of your other stories, and I really like your style. I hope to read more as you continue to update. So, I've added you, and because you have style, I've alerted for you as well.

Id love it if you would have a look at some of my pieces, I am quite proud of some of them, and would be please as punch if you could have a gander at them and let me know what you think.

Ah well, i must dash, but talk soon

Dizi

omg. that was fanastic and beautiful and amazing and sweetly wistful and ok, ok, I'll stop. my only complaint is the length. way too short. excuse, I'm going to go read more of your stories now.

That was really sweet. And I have tears in my eyes now from the last line. Brilliant.

I really liked this :)

omg, that was kool, Far away is my fave song but it alwayz makes me cry, because i used to live in australia but i moved back to NZ but after i left i fell in love with my best friend (we r both girls) so ur story fitted my view of the song

cya