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Reviews For: The Taste of Pink

RedHairRurouniFan
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet. I loved that last line. "Pink was my favorite color but now I'm not so sure." It's so sad that Kaoru can only pretend, but maybe, just maybe, Kenshin returns those feelings.

~RHRF
hye-kyo
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abuseit was so cute...^_^ love it!
skenshingumi
2006-04-15
ch 1,
abuseThe poem has an interesting change in tone. It opens rather happily. It’s as if things change as Kaoru sees just Kenshin’s back and wonders at the brush against her chin. It seems there is a wistful sadness there at the barrier the pink presents as she watches him turn. I liked that shift brought forward by the last line.
Postmodernism
2006-04-13
ch 1,
abuseEh?! You just can't end it like that! *shakes head* I like it very much! Hehee, I didn't seem to realize about the stanza mistake, so it was good. ^^ I think you should continue it with another poem.
MissTeak
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abuseI thought the way you ended off with "Pink was my favorite color, but now I'm not so sure" was really breath-taking. Beautiful, meaningful and refreshing, albeit the underlying sadness. Good job done, you got me (A Sanosuke/Megumi author) captivated with the beauty of KK's relationship!
Ohagi-chan
2006-04-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseYeah! I like it how it is! You don't have to change it! Miso tinted pink? ::giggle,hand covering mouth:: Until next time! Sayonara! - Ohagi-chan
Reignashii
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abusegrin* NICE! i rather like it!
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