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Reviews For: When I Don't Pick Up The Phone

MadeOfStars
2007-01-17
ch 1,
abuseJust found this and really enjoyed it. I especially liked the X-Files reference (named, categorized, and easily referenced)... Good work :)
Ataea
2006-05-01
ch 1,
abuse“Just indulge me, okay, Tempe? Let me take some punches for you tonight. Because unlike you evolved females, that’s how we primitive males show we care.”

very adorable line. Very booth-ish.. Your characterization is very good=)

See?! i'm leaving reviews! ^_^
jonasbrosluvr13
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abusei liked it
Somebody
2006-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like the fact that one can read this story without really needing to know the show. You can just go ahead and read this without even watching the series. Your plot and pacing is good, your grammar and spelling is impeccable. I like the innuendo of a budding relationship between Brennan and Booth. And loved the reference to what Angela said( knight in FBI standard-issue body armor). But by far, my favorite was the constant fidgeting. Your idea of her inner struggle of whether she should ease up on her "independant woman" act is good. Glad to see you back here in Hope to hear from you again soon.
Kippling Croft
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseGood story, I liked it a lot.
pagan-seijou
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI liked it!

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wolfmyjic
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI liked it alot. Very good.
Elizabeth Theresa
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, and I think it was perfect as a 1 shot. Not everything can always be tied up in a neat little box, this left some loose threads. Good job.
avaleighfitzgerald
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseAww that's so cute. i was actually planning to use that U2 song in my fic Repercussions cos it works so damn well for them. THat was a great fic. Maybe there will be a follow up? *she asks timidly) Anyhoo, great story!
Ava
AnnesVerse
2006-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThat was good. Thanks :)
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