 Kathie-Rin 2009-10-20 . chapter 6A girl! oh my god. that is so cool |
 Natsukimpd 2009-06-08 . chapter 6you promised to review this amazing story so review! |
 gaaralover1989 2008-10-21 . chapter 6wow so naruto is a he she lol update |
 Kagome171 2008-09-28 . chapter 6nice :D
update soon pls :D |
 Kagome171 2008-09-28 . chapter 4good :D |
 Kagome171 2008-09-28 . chapter 3realy nice :D
good work :D |
 Kagome171 2008-09-28 . chapter 2nice ! nice ! nice !
XD |
 Kagome171 2008-09-28 . chapter 1nice :D
he was raped... by itachi XD nice |
 blue-blueberry 2008-08-15 . chapter 6this story rocks ^-^ |
 fishbird 2008-05-12 . chapter 6THE AGONY! You really need to update soon, or I will just be a memory to the world. You wouldn't want that on your conscience, right?... Please update soon. :-) |
 GoldxSilence 2008-03-05 . chapter 6I LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP SOON! |
 purvy sage 2008-03-01 . chapter 6Well, I just read chapters 1-6 straight through and am DEVASTATED that there isn't a chapter 7! I am also nervous since chapter 6 took so long to get posted... while I understand... I have to ask...
*gets on knees*
PLEASE POST SOON!
There are a lot of things I can comment on... first, I love how you jump into Naruto's mind and show off his multiple-personalities... your descriptions earlier of cutters were quite accurate... seems like you may know someone personally perhaps... And while I have a lot of favorite quotes, for chapter 6 it had to be, "Gaara’s personal opinion was their father was a jackass with a capital ‘fucker’."
This provided a fantastic jolt of comedy in an otherwise very sad flashback. Which, by the way, was fantastic. I assume that Gaara chose "love" on his forehead to get his father's attention! VERY clever. *clapping hands*
Great T-shirt for Gaara in the previous chapters too... funny.
You've created a fantastic story here... I can clearly see the school in my mind... and his homelife... quite a dycotomy of happy go lucky and pure anxiety.
As I said before, please update soon! Clearly there are lots of others out there who feel the same way. ^_^;
Oh, and I'd love to see the romantic side of things get a bit spiced up... I keep wondering... will it be Gaara first... or maybe Sasuke (with his "rubbing small circles on his back")... or maybe Haku... Ah... the possibilities! |
 Re-Used 2008-02-20 . chapter 6LOVE it! |
 strange'eagle 2008-01-11 . chapter 2Got that fanart that I promised you up. X3 The link is on my profile. It's not much (I need a lot of work) but this actualy helped me pull myself out of my own writer's block. I hope it does the same for you. :) |
 black-hurt17 2008-01-02 . chapter 6yeah , thi seems so interestuing, and a girl?? now i really can't wait for the next chapetr, hope you'll update soon |