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| TenkenYuniko 2007-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh I'll tell you~` it was...amazing. Just that...the little moment when Jin hugged Fuu was just...um...well it didn't appear right to me. But oh well, haha nice! |
| Elva 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this short fic. Everyone was in character and it was really sweet and well written. Good job! |
| kiki 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseit was AWESOME! the only thing wrong about it was the part where you wrote that Jin saved Fuu more than Mugen, because in the show Mugen was the one who had saved Fuu ALL the time. btw great job :) |
| Remordere 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseYou know what? This story is AWESOME! PLEASE write more! You don't have to continue on with this story (even though it could definately turn into something interesting), it has been, like a YEAR since you wrote this, but I think it would be so cool if you would write something SamCham. You did such an awesome job on this; amazingly in character, and you're a really, REALLY good writer. You should totally do something new. Really amazing story. |
| radcat38 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseLike it. Would like to see more of the story. Interesting how you showed to different pairings and left the cliffhanger of which pairing would win. Please write more. |
| makura moderski 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abusei liked it . it was interesting |
| Princess Io 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseHmm...It's a great story so far. Please continue! ^^ |
| RoMaNTiCiLLuSioNS 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseit was short and sweet. a different kind of attempt to romance... i liked it. |
| ShadowVixen 2006-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I thought it was cute with Jin warming Fuu up, and Mugen actually using Fuu's name! It was adorable! Awesome job :) |
| Denekrad 2006-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, how cute! It's so adorable how Mugen plays hard to get with Fuu. -pinches Mugen's face while making "ga-ga" sounds as Mugen starts to remove his sword- A lovely one-shot and I hope you make more like this! |
| Marylouue 2006-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo cute, it was good... |
| Nana-Riiko 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abusevery good. |
| SisCo Kid 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like how u didn't have them just spill their hearts out at the end and have them tell eachother they love em. |
| the-everglow 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abusei thought it was really cute, i always luvd mugen/fuu pairings! |
| Rubber Duck Commander 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this piece! It was really well-written. I have some comments to make though; at one point you switched from past tense to present tense and then back to past... I wasn't sure if you meant to do that. But other than that, I loved this piece. ^_^ |