 space raider 2006-04-15 . chapter 1oh, nice! you write beautifully, you know that? and i love this idea! Faye (who is drunk) admits to loving Spike AND Jet! but... she's drunk. if she had been sober i would have said to keep this as a one-shot, but now i'm curious as to who Faye will actually end up with! will she and Jet get together? but what if Spike comes back? and is Ed really at the waterfall?
alright, i really want you to go on with this one, but if you feel that its a one-shot go ahead and keep it that way. lots of people wanted the series to go on longer too but... it just couldnt. like you said, we all feel kinda empty and hollow... yet satisfied! you can end this fic like that too--kinda bittersweetly, but personally i want to see you update!
your call though.
until next chapter (which i hope there will be)
xoxo! |