|Reviews for If Only|
| Lattelady 9/15/06 . chapter 1
You broke my heart big time. I could feel almost every word as you wrote. This was a fitting tribute to John Spencer. I think you would have said, "You did good, kid."
| Kennedy Leigh Morgan 6/4/06 . chapter 1
Oh for sad. But this was really, really good. I liked how you wrote it from Annabeth's perspective, and how you describe what she's feeling. Awesome job!
| greeneyesblue 4/12/06 . chapter 1
Wow that was great! We so need more McBeth on here, I mean they don't even have Annabeth's name in the drop down box!
Really beautiful, I loved it .
| ChildlikeWonder 4/12/06 . chapter 1
I loved this story so much!
It was written in character very well, and I loved the part about Leo's watch.
Poor Anna. I wish she had told him. But somehow... I think he knew.
Please write more soon!
| ceemonster 4/11/06 . chapter 1
Minor details - The episode took place in Nov. There was no "springing" forward around the time of his death.
Secret Service is trained to keep a person stabilized for 10mins in situations like a heartattack; 10mins because they are never more than 10mins from a hospital or other medical facility.
Other than that and a few grammar mistakes - write not right - you have promise. Good job.
| jenna's last jam 4/11/06 . chapter 1
That is so sad! I miss John! :(