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| Iara 2006-04-15 ch 7,  | abuseThat was so adorable. I loved it. |
| Rory von Trapp 2006-04-13 ch 4, | abuseThis is a beautiful story! After the events of the past couple of weeks, it's nice to see a story with a happier ending. My only suggestion would be to try to tie up loose ends before ending each chapter. It would be much easier to follow if you had more of a conclusion. At times it seems as if you're ending right in the middle of the scene just where things could get interesting. Great job!! |
| Iara 2006-04-13 ch 4, | abuseThis is sweet! I love Leo/Annabeth. I can't wait for teh 5th chapter. |