Oh...

Goodness...

Everything I've been reading for the past two days...makes all my stories look like crap...

-adds-

I wasn't too sure what I was getting into when I clicked on this, but wow. You handle the irony with ease, that's for sure.

I like it though, why not such a possibility? Certainly anyone could have seen him, and decided not to help, why not those three?

Clever idea, grasping on the very human aspect of Kikyou. Nicely done.

Oh man...

Oh, crap.

Nice irony. If any of those three guys had bothered to tend to Onigumo first, a lot of trouble would have been avoided. Ah, well. Hindsight is 20-20.

Excellent concept, and an even better story.

I still very much love this.

And congrats on placing at iyfic contest.

Nice... They say a good deed is its own reward, but complete selflessness would call for the sacrifice of selsatisfaction as well, wouldn't it? I liked this very much- sadly ironic, but truthful just the same.

Huh, isn't that ironic. The only pme amoung them to show compassion is the one who suffered the most

This is great,i also liked the summary it is cool:)