nice story...

keep on workin some new ones!

more power!

This could posibly be the best tenchi story I have ever read. I would clasify it under short movie. damn you...now I want to see this story as a movie. all e-mails are apreciated since I hardly get any. allright, keep writin every body

this was such the awesome story, i luved it! i am a huge ayeka&tenchi together fan

:-)

that was GREAT! write more T/A fics! PLEASE!

I'm an R/T fan myself, but this was a good A/T story. All of the characters were in character and Ayeka got Tenchi. If Ayeka and Tenchi were the cannon couple for the show, this is how they should get together with no OOCness. I have only read two other stories, which put put all of the chracters of the show in in character for an A/T story. I love Ryoko, but Ayeka is also a magnificent character and deserves respect just as much as Ryoko. All in all, great A/T story and I can't wait to see more of your work. Ja ne!

great story! i am a fan of Ayeka/Tenchi fics.

that was sooooooooooooooo !love it!

:D THAT WAS SOOOO CUTE! I'm gonna take your advice and write a story about ryoko and ayeka soon. and when you finish my story, be sure to tell me, I wanna read it ;). TTFN rini

that waz sooooo sweet.i luv it. keep up wit the goo work!

great story! i luv ayeka/tenchi romances!

Nice try for your first ayeka/tenchi fic. I thought it was very sweet _. Can't wait to read your next fic!

I hate the idea of Ayeka and Tenchi!

It was lovely! Congratulations! I loved the idea of Ayeka being kidnapped... no wait a second... I loved the idea of Tenchi rescuing Ayeka. It was so beautiful! I'm glad Ryoko didn't turn out evil - it almost looked like she would at the beginning so I'm glad she and Ayeka are still friends! I really liked that stuff about the dreams that Kur-Rye made: poor Kiyone, I wonder if she'll ever get her promotion! And Washus machine - I think Sasamis dream was my favourite, though. It seemed the most vivid and real. I loved that part at the end about the battle with Kur-Rye, for a moment thre, I was worried that Ayeka wasn't going to wake up after all, poor Sasami getting stuck in that mirror. Anyway, great story all round, and you dedicated it to me! *blushes* Thank-you so much! Great story!

Coolies

I hate It! What happen to my little Ryoko?... nice fic...