Amazing... it figures he would torture himself along with her. Well done, very deep

i read your "Monstrosity" before this, and couldnt resist its predecessor hehe *hugs V and winces as her empathy kicks into overdrive* and Evey thinks SHES goin through torture? if she could know how he feels, if only for a moment... gah. scuse me while my heart shatters like V's mirror

I sought and I found. You have a gift for this kind of thing I think. I dont know how you got into his head, but you are firmly lodged there and the results are wonderful.

Cheers,
Free..who is excitedly off to the next bit you wrote.

"He can't remember the accent, he's sure he's getting it wrong"

I love this line, full of meaning.

Wow. Short but effective. I love the way we see how V punishes himself along with Evey. I kind of imagined he'd be unable to eat a decent meal knowing what he was serving to her. Very nicely written, I love your stark style.

COOL.

This was lovely! You portrayed V's heartbreak over torturing Evey beautifully. I loved how V had been "sharing her meals". Call me sick, but I thought it was cute lol. Well, great job and I hope to see more writing from you soon.

I love it! Very powerful and a great companion to the film.

This is lovely. Truly, I enjoy stories from another character's perspective. Quite well done.
Any more to add to this one?
-Hastings

*wild applause*

Fav part = the line about the accent. Gosh, the whole image of capable, indomitable, rock-solid V being THAT CLOSE to screwing up is brilliant. Brilliantly written and also really cool to get to see.

Could I beg you to write something more plotty? I know some people just don't do that stuff, or you might not feel like it, or you might be too busy, but PLZ? You're so good!