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| WhoAmI? 2006-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting, a proper balad. One thing I noticed, however, was that the name Matthias was spelled incorrectly. It has 2 "t"s, not 1. Otherwise, very good. |
| Clouded Horizon 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked this, it sounded like a proper ballad. Well done! Just be careful that your lines fit the rhythm properly. :~) |