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emi-87 2008-10-07 . chapter 37
Great!! I can't wait to read the sequel!Good luck..;)
KaoriYatsura 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I really like the ideas that you have going on here. I'm just really distracted by the fact that all of your sentences seem to start with the word She, He, it or the. I know this is really nit picky but I feel like your writing could be amazing if you would only change to first word of a few of your sentences every so often. I really like what you wrote and it just detracted from your wonderful ideas.
melancholy of saturn 2008-10-05 . chapter 37
I read the first part of the sequel on your homepage. Very good so far!
Valkyrie Celes 2008-09-26 . chapter 35
A sequel would be fun, I'd like to see one eventually. You did a great job with this story!
peaches 2008-09-20 . chapter 36
hahaha that is so cute!
wow I simply love these characters
more and more every time I read your story
I can't wait to read your sequel
Their new lives together and new adventures
Yaten and Minako always being my favorite
and I loved what you did with them,
not to mention Seiya and Usagi being a close second!

I certainly hope that Yaten and Minako gets to finally have a private moment together though!
Dertupio 2008-09-12 . chapter 36
Como on we nned the weeding of serena and Seiya and a sequel sounds perfect
katblue 2008-09-09 . chapter 36
Yeah, sequel! It was simple ending that left us wanting more. I was like who's getting married? And it was Ami-chan. Yeah! I liked Yaten's proposal. It was cute.
emi-87 2008-09-09 . chapter 36
I can't wait to read the sequel...Your stories are original and captivating...Good luck! ;)...:)
Georgie 2008-09-09 . chapter 36
Oh my god, that was so beautiful! *wipes a tear* And I laughed, when Yaten and Minako finally wanted to have sex but then Rei-chan interrupted. Thank you for this story!
princess999 2008-09-08 . chapter 1
WOW!your story is awsome!i read it all in 2 days it was so exciting that i just could`nt stop! i loved everything about it. though i wish it had more minako & yaten in it cause from the middle of the story theres not much about them anymore ,anyway it is a wonderful story & please update soon i cant wait till the last chapter!oh & of course i want a sequel!every one does...
Angelical Lady 2008-08-12 . chapter 1
Oww,I LOVED this chapter!*0*
Actually,this is my fav story!\o/
It's too sad that is ending...Y_Y
But...hopefully,there will be a sequel!\o/
*crossing fingers*
I really want you to write a sequel of this story!\o/
It would be great!*0*

;**
lozziee 2008-08-06 . chapter 35
i love this story.. have you finished writing the last chapter yet??


i cant wait to read it!

its great that the story had a lot of detail..it made it seem real and everything tied together

GREAT JOB!!
Mina 2008-08-05 . chapter 35
Heyy,, u might remember me or maybe u don't lol i talked to u once but anyways i was thinking u should publish this... no lie change the names to the characters and publish it! i swear it would make so much awards and everything I LOVE THIS STORY! and I HOPE THERE WILL BE ANOTHER BOOK!! AND U SHOULD RLLY THINK ABOUT PUBLISHING!

~ Mina email me back on what you think!
Dertupio 2008-08-05 . chapter 35
Yes thanks for the update. This story is nearly finish and I love it


Update soon
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn 2008-08-04 . chapter 35
Well DUH!! Of course I want to see a sequel! This is one of my most FAVE stories!
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