This seems interesting so far, but the only few things that irritated me were that in you thrid paragraph, it's flour, not flower. And aisle is spelt... aisle. Otherwise, it's very good

REally awesome! I love this, I just can't stop, it's so good! Very good plot with tons of humour! I love it

I liked your previous chapter, but this one is like full of surprises! Damn, now Usagi has been brainwashed.

What made me laugh is that Haruka saying that Michiru uses that potion to bring back original memories a lot, I kinda wonder why? Haruka's smirk says it all! xD

o-o oh my gosh, Usagi being drugged is not a good thing!! I'm so worried, the suspense is killing me!

Oh there are more blessed childs out there? I got a hunch that Haruka, Michiru, Hotaru, and Setsuna are them! (I also have a hunch that Mamoru has some play in it too)

Aww poor Seiya, doing everything for Usagi and even if he is all bruised up and all. Usagi!! Don't you see that he's doing everything for you!? Lol, I'm here arguing with the screen of my computer and folks here thing I'm crazy xD

Yay! Yaten loves Minako-chan! Though... we all knew he was gonna like her, hehehe!! I love the little fight between him and Taiki, that was just funny!

Oh man so many things happening! Poor Usagi, I kinda hope she didn't meant what she said about Mamoru and everything. Poor Seiya, I hope he can confess! C'mon Usagi, give into Seiya!!

Also, I feel bad for Haruka.. HarukaXMichiru is my favorite couple in Sailor Moon! I hope Haruka gets her chance to save the life of her lover, I really hope so!

OMG! *squeals* I love this chapter! Yaten is so has a crush on Minako-chan.

C'mon Usagi, just accept that you like Seiya!
I love the interaction between Ami and Taiki, it's so cute!!

You have more SeiyaXUsagi fics!? That's awesome, I love the pairing more than MamoruXUsagi! (even though I know they're destined, I feel so bad for Seiya)

Anyway, I like the atmoshpere between them, angsty situation with Seiya and Usagi, I hope she accepts him. I'm wondering about Yaten now, hmm... what will happen?

Yay, Yuuichiro has arrived! Rei's being hard to get as usual, heheh!!

Yes, indeed poor Haruka... she's always being addressed as a guy! But that's what makes it funny!

Oh my god, I have a good feeling about the two couples... *squeals*

eheh, I think this chapter is really cute! I can't imagine Seiya or Yaten with short hair! Not even Usagi!! Well, Taiki is the only one with the trademark ponytail, for now I guess...

Yaten's being a pervert!! xD

I can't believe Yaten kissed Usagi as a thank you! What would've happened if Seiya saw that!? Hehehe!!

Oh, so Yaten was actually kind before? Now I understand why he is so mean and so cruel! The love power of Minako will aid him! By the way, we need to see more of Taiki and Ami ^^ And some SeiyaXUsagi loving!

ooh! I really love this story, it was so funny between Haruka and Seiya, lol "you have nothing up to" that was just hilarious! Frankly, I'd actually expect Seiya saying that! xD

When will Yaten calm down and be a little nicer? Lol, but I like him this way, it shows his evil side and we know what a fire cracker he is! I really love this story, it's awesome and filled with everything! Romance, comedy, action and adventure!

You've really done such a great job!

So cool! I'm really enjoying this story, a lot! I got a few laughs becuse you made some parts pretty funny. Yaten is so hot headed xD

Wow, I never thought I would say this, but... well even in the anime Yaten was such a foul mouthed and snappy person.

The way you portray him in the story is excellent, exactly how I would imagine Yaten to act like if he were really a pirate! Though, he's so mean and man what a (excuse my language) **! But I still him, he's so fun to mess around with ^-^

Yay! Some Seiya and Usagi moment, well sort of, but yay! Seiya's so awesome and guillable, I'm just happy that he did it for her. Though I can't imagine Usagi with short hair! o-o wow, that's a shock!

Oh, I love this chapter! Really good, I like the idea of Rei being a pirate since she's really tough and fiery, it suits her. I love the idea of her being Seiya's sister, that's really cool!

I can't wait until the romance starts!

Heh, I can imagine what the crew will think about Usagi's cooking... heheh!!

Oh!! This looks like it's going to be an awesome story! I simple LOVE SeiyaXUsagi, YatenXMinako and TaikiXAmi ^-^ (I used to love MamoruXUsagi, but I guess I wanted a change in pairing and besides Seiya's so awesome and he can be a sweet heart!)

I love the idea of pirates, this looks so cool! I can imagine the Three Lights in Pirate clothing, I think that would suit Yaten and Seiya more than Taiki (who's more of a gentleman).

I'm loving the first chapter, I better read the second one! ^^