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sailormoon-is-eternal 6/16/07 . chapter 26
I can't believe I missed this story. It's very well written. I can picture each scene perfectly in my mind. I hope that Usagi eventually admits her feelings toward Seiya. Can't wait till your update!
Poruporu 6/14/07 . chapter 26
Yo! i've to tell ya that i've read this chapter right after sent me an e-mail, are you wondering why i wait for A WEEK! to review...hee...hee... coz i've read yer story in my college and i've to do something after i've reading and intend to review after i got home, but i've to admit that i juz forgot...hehehe :P

What a twist in the story! i thought that ya would juz sent them to the island that doing the ritual or something, but...shipwrecked... it's REALLY surprise me! and i wonder about the end when Yaten told Haruka about who's missing...isn't that mean Usagi was not missing, or did he juz forget about her hehehe... if ya ask me, for knowing Yaten personality, i thought it was the second reason...hahaha XD !

Hey! i've watch POTC3 a few day ago (since it's came about 2-3 weeks ago, so the cinema was almost empty, juz me& my friends watching like we're in our own home 5) and I LOVE ELIZABETH SO MUCH! She's so col! (even though i'm a girl...hehehe) but i missed the ending after credits, coz i juz too lazy to wait... :D

See ya next chapter!
katblue 6/5/07 . chapter 26
You can't kill them. I'll hurt ya. At least Usagi. LOL. That was cool. Fighting, the heat between Seiya and Usagi and a storm. Perfect ingredients for a great chapter.
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn 6/5/07 . chapter 26
this is really good, can't wait to read omre!

Avid Reader and Writer, Hotaru-chan
Valkyrie Celes 6/5/07 . chapter 26
Aw, this chapter was a bit too tame. I wanted the fight to go further, I really wanted Mamoru to get his assed kicked! He's such a jerk in this!

I can't wait to find out what Usagi's power is. Update again soon :)
lookchick 6/1/07 . chapter 25
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!although most of it made me cry.don't stop now the story was getting to the good part.not that the other parts weren't because they were. I mean I just started reading it today and finished today. I LOVE IT! Especially since its a whole pirate concept.I love pirates. I actually want to be one. Lol, but seriously keep writing. Don't leave me hanging like that I want to know what happens.lol yes I know I'm weird but hey that's me. Lol
lilyfairygirl 5/18/07 . chapter 25
PLEASE dont let seiya die because i think seiya usagi are cute together is seiya going to okay in the next chapter let me know okay and i do LIKE this story a lot and let know when the next chapter is up okay

lilyfairygirl
Poruporu 5/17/07 . chapter 25
Yo! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, coz i was quite busy lately...but i'm VERY happy that ya update so fast!hee...hee..._

Oh My Gosh! Now who gonna save Seiya? or he can save himself? now i juz realised that i shouldn't guess the story amymore and wait until ya update the next chapter, you know why?...coz it's more fun that way! ha..ha..ha

See ya next chapter!
Dertupio 5/16/07 . chapter 25
ha

I love the chapter , and the cliff hanger is great, Mamoru power where does it come from, and which power does Serena have? and I understand Seiya has the ability to never lose in a battle, it will be cool if some extraordinary power comes from Seiya and create a more beautiful sword or create armor that even the sword of Mamoru can not penetrate (just a suggestion).

Update soon
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn 5/16/07 . chapter 25
can't wait to read more cuz this is really good!

Avid Reader and Writer, Hotaru-chan
Lunadoragon 5/16/07 . chapter 25
Usagi is gonna stop Mamoru...right? RIGHT? _ I can't look! But I must! O.O What happens next! Great, I'm gonna be thinking about this instead of wedding stuff...eap!

Ja ne! _

Luna
KatBlue 5/8/07 . chapter 24
Oh my gosh I'm so excited. What's next? Oh poor Seiya. I'll marry him. Please let me marry him. LOL. Rei's got a little crush right? On Mamoru. I could see that happening. Please update as fast as you can. I love this story and I tend to run away with it.
Dertupio 5/7/07 . chapter 24
I love it thanks you very much for your writing

What else is going to happen
Eternal Cosmic Sailor Saturn 5/7/07 . chapter 24
i hope you update soon ucz this is really good!

Avid Reader and Writer, HOtaru-chan
Sasskitten 5/7/07 . chapter 24
Leki: Wow I sense a cat fight.

Dane: Me to.

Uh a cat fight? But they are both guys not girls.

Dane: We know.

Leki: But Rei has feelings for Mamoru and so does Usagi.

Oh I know what you are getting at. YOu think that the two girls will fight over Mamoru While Seiya and Mamoru will fight over Usagi. *The two muses in training nod.*

Well, maybe. But we have to wait and see. So update soon.
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