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NejiHina4Ever 6/23/09 . chapter 5
ooh! I really love this story, it was so funny between Haruka and Seiya, lol "you have nothing up to" that was just hilarious! Frankly, I'd actually expect Seiya saying that! xD

When will Yaten calm down and be a little nicer? Lol, but I like him this way, it shows his evil side and we know what a fire cracker he is! I really love this story, it's awesome and filled with everything! Romance, comedy, action and adventure!

You've really done such a great job!
NejiHina4Ever 6/22/09 . chapter 4
So cool! I'm really enjoying this story, a lot! I got a few laughs becuse you made some parts pretty funny. Yaten is so hot headed xD
NejiHina4Ever 6/22/09 . chapter 3
Wow, I never thought I would say this, but... well even in the anime Yaten was such a foul mouthed and snappy person.

The way you portray him in the story is excellent, exactly how I would imagine Yaten to act like if he were really a pirate! Though, he's so mean and man what a (excuse my language) bitch! But I still him, he's so fun to mess around with -

Yay! Some Seiya and Usagi moment, well sort of, but yay! Seiya's so awesome and guillable, I'm just happy that he did it for her. Though I can't imagine Usagi with short hair! o-o wow, that's a shock!
NejiHina4Ever 6/22/09 . chapter 2
Oh, I love this chapter! Really good, I like the idea of Rei being a pirate since she's really tough and fiery, it suits her. I love the idea of her being Seiya's sister, that's really cool!

I can't wait until the romance starts!

Heh, I can imagine what the crew will think about Usagi's cooking... heheh!
NejiHina4Ever 6/22/09 . chapter 1
Oh! This looks like it's going to be an awesome story! I simple LOVE SeiyaXUsagi, YatenXMinako and TaikiXAmi - (I used to love MamoruXUsagi, but I guess I wanted a change in pairing and besides Seiya's so awesome and he can be a sweet heart!)

I love the idea of pirates, this looks so cool! I can imagine the Three Lights in Pirate clothing, I think that would suit Yaten and Seiya more than Taiki (who's more of a gentleman).

I'm loving the first chapter, I better read the second one!
Blahblahblahblahb 5/19/09 . chapter 36
ok haha! i just posted a review on your fanfiction site for the sequel to this story. lol...I know this is like my second review in teh past two hours...but i wuz re-reading the last chapter for this story adn was thinking about the next one...

it'd be nice if usagi would take on the role of a pirate as well. hahaha...i could totally picture how her klutziness would come into play. Besides, it's soo sad that she has to leave Minako (and Seiya has to leave the rest of the crew)...not to mention taiki and ami. It'd be nice if they could be pirates too (haha...taiki just looks so darn cool with his calm/intelligent demeanor as a pirate!). Hopefully they'll feel the excitement of takign onto these adventures!

o god...dunno how this is gonna work though since they've always (sort of) wanted a peaceful life...away from pirates...

but knowing your stories, you've always manage to create wonders. Truthfully, i find "Adventures of captain Yaten" even more interesting than "Pirates of the Caribean". Your plot twists are really interesting and i LOVE how you managed to incorporate some sailor moon stuff into something that's not sailor moon (u know, the differnet powers that each blessed child has).

Will you be posting the sequel on this site as well? It's just that fanfiction(dot)net is easier to access (and thus easier for people to know that you have a new story). Plus, i think it's where you'll get the most reviews since it's where most s/u fans like to linger...

But anyhoo, i LOVE your stories and i'm totally dying for the next chatper to come out!

luv ya lots!
YamiBlaze 2/8/09 . chapter 37
Loved it! please post the sequal soon. I hope your husband is better,wish him good luck for me.

love ya loads

SailorMoonFighter
Crystalinchen 2/6/09 . chapter 36
Last chapter T.T T.T T.T

This is so frustrating,

I really love all of your stories.

And everytime I've finished reading one,

I become depressed because these fantastic stories are over now!

Sry, know I'm kinda crazy,...

hope you update elemental love soon...
emi-87 10/7/08 . chapter 37
Great! I can't wait to read the sequel!Good luck..;)
KaoriYatsura 10/5/08 . chapter 1
I really like the ideas that you have going on here. I'm just really distracted by the fact that all of your sentences seem to start with the word She, He, it or the. I know this is really nit picky but I feel like your writing could be amazing if you would only change to first word of a few of your sentences every so often. I really like what you wrote and it just detracted from your wonderful ideas.
saturn's eyes 10/5/08 . chapter 37
I read the first part of the sequel on your homepage. Very good so far!
Valkyrie Celes 9/26/08 . chapter 35
A sequel would be fun, I'd like to see one eventually. You did a great job with this story!
peaches 9/20/08 . chapter 36
hahaha that is so cute!

wow I simply love these characters

more and more every time I read your story

I can't wait to read your sequel

Their new lives together and new adventures

Yaten and Minako always being my favorite

and I loved what you did with them,

not to mention Seiya and Usagi being a close second!

I certainly hope that Yaten and Minako gets to finally have a private moment together though!
Dertupio 9/12/08 . chapter 36
Como on we nned the weeding of serena and Seiya and a sequel sounds perfect
katblue 9/9/08 . chapter 36
Yeah, sequel! It was simple ending that left us wanting more. I was like who's getting married? And it was Ami-chan. Yeah! I liked Yaten's proposal. It was cute.
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