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Neptunee 4/13/06 . chapter 1
I love it.. I was really trying to figure out how Takke (probley spelt that wrong) was going to dead with Ami..but in my head I was thinking more along the lines of

"Please Miss I wish not to harm you, so please come with me .. "

and her saying something like this..

""I wish for no harm ether.. " and going with him..

I also love mina tossing the stew at Yaten.. hehehe.. but you spelling is great.. gramer is a bit off.. all around great story.. I was laughing and having a good time.. not to add that my dog farted.. LOL I like it alot. PLease make more.. I also have a soft spot for pirets.
Lunadoragon 4/12/06 . chapter 1
Ack! three stories at one? You're a genious! I do think that the three would make very good pirates indeed (And I would know, I know a lot of them!) I wouldnt mind...er...wait...um...I can't wait for the next chaper!

Ja ne! _'

Luna
Koijima 4/12/06 . chapter 1
Yay! Another story!

*dances*

I enjoyed the way this started out. :) I think I am going to like this one alot!
serenity287 4/12/06 . chapter 1
hey interesting fic.. send in the next chapter soon!
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