 Neptunee 4/13/06 . chapter 1I love it.. I was really trying to figure out how Takke (probley spelt that wrong) was going to dead with Ami..but in my head I was thinking more along the lines of
"Please Miss I wish not to harm you, so please come with me .. "
and her saying something like this..
""I wish for no harm ether.. " and going with him..
I also love mina tossing the stew at Yaten.. hehehe.. but you spelling is great.. gramer is a bit off.. all around great story.. I was laughing and having a good time.. not to add that my dog farted.. LOL I like it alot. PLease make more.. I also have a soft spot for pirets. |