This seems interesting so far, but the only few things that irritated me were that in you thrid paragraph, it's flour, not flower. And aisle is spelt... aisle. Otherwise, it's very good

Oh! This looks like it's going to be an awesome story! I simple LOVE SeiyaXUsagi, YatenXMinako and TaikiXAmi ^-^ (I used to love MamoruXUsagi, but I guess I wanted a change in pairing and besides Seiya's so awesome and he can be a sweet heart!)

I love the idea of pirates, this looks so cool! I can imagine the Three Lights in Pirate clothing, I think that would suit Yaten and Seiya more than Taiki (who's more of a gentleman).

I'm loving the first chapter, I better read the second one! ^^

I really like the ideas that you have going on here. I'm just really distracted by the fact that all of your sentences seem to start with the word She, He, it or the. I know this is really nit picky but I feel like your writing could be amazing if you would only change to first word of a few of your sentences every so often. I really like what you wrote and it just detracted from your wonderful ideas.

WOW!your story is awsome!i read it all in 2 days it was so exciting that i just could`nt stop! i loved everything about it. though i wish it had more minako & yaten in it cause from the middle of the story theres not much about them anymore ,anyway it is a wonderful story & please update soon i cant wait till the last chapter!oh & of course i want a sequel!every one does...

Oww,I LOVED this chapter!*0*

Actually,this is my fav story!\o/

It's too sad that is ending...Y_Y

But...hopefully,there will be a sequel!\o/

*crossing fingers*

I really want you to write a sequel of this story!\o/

It would be great!*0*

;**

A person did a plagiat of some of yours stories. you should take a look coz' she ruined your fantastic work!

I can't understand this kind of behavior but i'm just thinking that these people are just out of ideas, and without some respect for stealing all the plot!

just look for "elemental children" and "pirate princess"

you have all my support and continue yours amazing stories!

ok i have to admit it... YOU ARE TOTALLY GREAT! you really are a very good author... honestly! i have read many books and this story as well as your other stories have what a story need to be good: unexpected twists, interesting plot, romance that makes you want to hold your breath until the charactrs end up together... and lots of adventures! PLEASE UPDATE! SERIOUSLY I have become an addict of this story... ;-p many many wishes and kisses to you and your family... UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

update

please continue with this story and are u going to have them transform into the sailor scouts

Aww this is cool hey you guys might like my story to it's got a lot of twists in it. Okay the first chapter is a bit weird but I fixed the weirdness in the rest of them. But anyways Update more. I must keep reading this.

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

I love it.. I was really trying to figure out how Takke (probley spelt that wrong) was going to dead with Ami..but in my head I was thinking more along the lines of

"Please Miss I wish not to harm you, so please come with me .. "

and her saying something like this..

""I wish for no harm ether.. " and going with him..

I also love mina tossing the stew at Yaten.. hehehe.. but you spelling is great.. gramer is a bit off.. all around great story.. I was laughing and having a good time.. not to add that my dog farted.. LOL I like it alot. PLease make more.. I also have a soft spot for pirets.

Ack! three stories at one? You're a genious! I do think that the three would make very good pirates indeed (And I would know, I know a lot of them!) I wouldnt mind...er...wait...um...I can't wait for the next chaper!

~Ja ne! ^_^'

~Luna

Yay! Another story!

*dances*

I enjoyed the way this started out. :) I think I am going to like this one alot!

hey interesting fic.. send in the next chapter soon!