I won’t repeat what others have said. It is a good story. Needs a little reviewing and cleaning. Some of the things/events, are just to out there. It’s a little hard to follow the story some times (not talking about the CAP's). I would call it a good rugh draft and a good store line.

Hi, I thought the summary sounded interesting, but I simply cannot read a all-caps story. It is too hard on the eyes.

With a few clicks of the mouse in a nice word processing program the whole story can be changed to "Sentence Case." If you don't know how to do that email me. Ok?

Hey, Please kill the CAPS LOCK !

And it's O'Neill, 2 l's. There's another Jack O'Neil in the Air Force, but he has no sense of humor.

(That last part was taken from the series)

Please repost this story so that it isn't completely in CAPITAL LETTERS, cause that is very uncomfortable to read.