That was so sweet! I LOVED it!




~~LOTRRanger

This was so sweet! I loved it! Well done! Your characters were very realistic and seemed to have a life of their own. Well done!

Nela

Oh that was a really great story! I am so glade that you let Boromir live. Keep up the good work!

Malia

This story was brilliant. I love the first couple of chapters, ver aspiring. Good work!

Hi, I just read the story through and had to review. Despite my apprehensions about it turning into a simple Sue-story it was beautiful. The struggles that both went through before admitting their love for one another was so human and therefore resounded greatly with me. I wish more people would write like this.

Aw. She should have slapped him, just for the hell of it, then gave him a big kiss, and they go and get married that day. Although that wouldn't be as romantic. Lol. Wonderful story. Elwen.

No, no, no - what is this "The End" thing? Surely that can't be right! I was just getting used to the two of them and the plot!

Just promise me you'll do a story after the "Yes" so we can see how life proceded for them afterwards?... hint, hint

How sweet! I absolutely can't wait to read the sequel! I like how you left us without knowing whether she said yes or no, but I can pretty well guess...YES!! Anyway, please put the sequel up soon because I thoroughly enjoyed this one!

The Editor of MBDTA

I like the new ending! (Though I did like the bit you used to have about her dancing with Eomer a second time because Boromir was so attractive when pouting.) And I think it works better his not relaying his whole tale of the journey. Your readers already know it, so it seemed a bit redundant and slowed things down. This is a more to-the-point ending. Her coldness, born of all the uncertainty of the long months of separation, seems reasonable, as well as her finally giving in to her feelings.

Well done! (Guess you've been using the ffn down-time to good effect! I, on the other hand, have written nothing...)

- Deandra

Just a little different from Tolkien, but it's all good. It would be horrible for Boromir to die at this point, but he wouldn't leave if he was Steward, since that would leave Minas Tirith without any leadership. I know Faramir was Steward while he stayed in the House, but he is not Steward. Wonders never cease. Elwen.

Another good chapter, fate certainly seems keen to keep Boromir and Morwyth apart doesn't it?
Nice little scene with Eomer - I enjoyed it very much.

Hey, I like! I love Sean Bean in almost anything he's been in. LoTR, Troy, westerns (was it Tombstone or Wyatt Erp?...) I am so glad to see that you took a different path than the movie and allowed his character to live.

I like Moryth's character as well. Proof to the doubters out there that not every female OC has to end up being a Mary Sue as well.

Keep up the good work. You're definitely on my alerts list!

That was brilliant! I like how you brought Eomer into it! Lovely chapter! Please do update soon!

>He grinned. “No, not a wall. Just me.

I love that line!

- Deandra

This a lovely story! I'm a sucker for Boromir-doesn't-die fics, especially when they are this well written. Moryth is a good, likable character - not at all Mary-Sueish, and I'm enjoying the way she and Boromir are changing their opinions of each other. I look forward to more.