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| Reklar 2006-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseWell, it was certainly a well-written and interesting read, but I guess I just don't appreciate the art of writing enough because I didn't analyze it, I just read the story. Excellent description, fine details and tension, but I didn't notice the techniques explained in the notes, so I'm not the ideal audience apparently. :) -Reklar |
| asdfghjk 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked the italic style that you wrote this in. I figured that the italicized parts were flashbacks of Whirlwind himself, and liked how it turned out to be different then what I thought. |
| JDCorley 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI "got it" with the use of the italics. Although I was expecting a comedy from your forum posts! This is an interesting view of Black Whirlwind's history. To take a basically comedic (if darkly comedic) character like BW and emphasize the darker parts of his background is always intriguing. Good technique, good improvisation with the elements you were given. I guess I'll just have to wait to find out what the story is behind that public defecation charge! ;) |