I love this story.

Wow. I didn't really like the beginning of the first chapter, not being used to second-person narration I was very desorientated. But after the third chapter or so, I started to enjoy this story immensely.
I'm off to read the sequel :)

greetings,
themysterioustickingnoise

Reading this again for who knows why. And like last time so far awesome story :D But damn like last time i still wish he burned down the burrow and the twins' shop :(

I am going have to stop reading here i am a BIG fan on Good Hermione and cant even read a fic where she 100% of hur free will this Chapter shood I will still love it that she not so you make hur good

I no i have read the rest of your Storys and up to this poin was a god Story but this part of the plot make be turn a ways Like all them Gay fic out there

Well…
I should have picked up on the title, but it wasn’t until I read one of Harry’s lines – ‘well it’s alright by me’, that I realised it was all related to one of Jethro’s song. Some of the chapter titles should have given it away, but maybe I’m descended from a troll. Tull’s records are still some of my favourites, after more that 25 years since I first heard, bought, and loved them. (Thank God for older girlfriends, with great taste in music when I was Harry’s age)
Loved the story. One of the most interesting and enjoyable reads to date in the fanfic world. Even though I love the Weasleys, Hermione… and even Dumbledore, at least your crucified them with style. I’m going to have to read all your works now – it’s amazing the little gems of stories one finds when fishing around in other peoples favourites.
Generally I don’t like to read stories that are incomplete, but I’ll definitely have to read the unfinished sequel, even if I have to re-read it over with every update you make (well, hopefully make). But somehow I feel that your stories will ‘stick’ in my mind enough that I won’t need to re-read.
I might even have to look at some of your ‘for profit’ work.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

Really interesting and exciting story. One of the best I've read. Now, on to the sequel..

Wow...awesome.

Just have to comment on this...
Frau Blucher! *Horse Whinnies*
YAY

Another excellent fanfic. One of the best I've read. I had doubted that any story would feel the same without a foul-mouthed Sorting Hat but this was truly great. Moreover it has inspired me to dabble in some 2nd person writing.

You come up with great characters, and have an admirable detachment/ruthlessness when dealing with them which allows you to write the hard times they find themselves in with power and realism (for a story involving magic). Your Luna, Kwan, and Harry were probably my favourites, but the whole cast was great.

One might almost think you have something against the Weasleys, in your fics, and I'm not complaining. It's nice to take some characters out of the box.

What you write is original, funny, and can evoke a plethora of emotions. You certainly created an excellent Bill and the whole concept of warding and Cursebreaking you explore is much better than other variations I've read.

Truly a unique story. Keep writing...

Excellent story. Off to read the sequel.
I hope hope hope you won't weasel (!) your way into forgiving all who when to DoM with Harry.

Loverly. Just perfect. Do I love it or do I love it=?

Great plan, great thinking. The only things that still worry me are reconciliation with "friends" and Luna.
I am definitely going to try all the stories you've written for Harry Potter.

Brilliant imagination. The city, the characters (Collin and Sanchez in this chapter), and Harry's work with flying undead. Brilliant (and scary ;-)

I enjoyed this story very much. Great and entertaining plot. A different writing style than I'm used to and it took some time to adjust to it. Definitely not a story you see every day.

The only real downside to it is that Harry turns into a bit of a player, being with several girls, most he has only really met once. For a person who has serious trust issues due to what Dumbledore did it seems kinda unrealistic that he'd that. Would have made more sense if he had perhaps met Karina or Lauren and then build up a trust over time, before 'doing it'.

Not bad. A little wordy but over all good. However this should be a HP and Bill W. story not HP & LL. Darrel