 Waterbender of the South 5/6/12 . chapter 6I also wear the mask of destruction because no one loves me!
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You didn't believe that, did you? HA! I DON'T CARE ABOUT LOVE! I'll eat anything that MOVES!
LOL. I like this chapter by far the most, but I believe that you did a great job getting inside Naruto and Gaara's heads. They were my other favorites.
I also appreciated the tribute to SakuLee (or is it LeeSaku?). I like that a lot. Sakura's chapter was my next favorite.
I'll be honest, Neji's was confusing, but I kinda get where your coming from. And it's true that Neji us extremely difficult to write, so I salute you for your valiant attempt.
Overall, I really enjoyed this story.
Thanks! |
 nlsdn5 12/25/11 . chapter 5LeeSaku is beautiful. He brings out the maturity in her, whilst she behaves like a child around Sasuke. |
 Dezzy13 10/14/11 . chapter 6I did not see kyuubi coming and all of the stories are great. |
 Aiseki0Hikari 4/2/11 . chapter 6Awwe TT
And Kyuubi.. 0/o 'pls don't kill me..for thinking..no..wait!.. For laughing at YoU! |
 Pepe Le Pew 3/26/10 . chapter 6I am now totally in love with a fox that's going insane in a human's body. It's hilarious. Poor Kyuubi! |
 bubblegum-chi 11/16/09 . chapter 6I love how Kyuubi is so sexually frustrated. HAHA!
The line:
"I also wear the mask of destruction because no one loves me!"
made me laugh so loud that I almost cried! XD
I loved it.
Great Job _ |
 bubblegum-chi 11/16/09 . chapter 3It shows in your writing that you had a hard time writing Neji's mask.
But I kind of liked it esp. the line
"A genius of spotting other geniuses."
It was well kind of like Neji to me :)
Perhaps it was because Neji's 'mask' was already destroyed by Naruto that you had a hard time writing it.
Love your fic btw. |
 Belle Mort 13 8/29/09 . chapter 6Merry Meet
you know
you could write a sequel where the masks are removed and they start to find out who they really are
... exept for Kyuubi but maybe you could give him a chew toy? you know, to work his frustrations out on.
That would be cool
anyway awesome story
good job
blessed be
from Belle |
 unconnected 7/1/09 . chapter 5You just changed my outlook on Sakura Haruno. Congratulations. |
 kyoko131 6/7/09 . chapter 2Tjis is really cut!e I wrote a story about how naruto wears a mask too. Only ur's is so good! |
 z-Madness-z 5/27/09 . chapter 3 Now this was interesting. I thought Neji would have a mask to cover up his self disappointment and hopelessness. Because y'know how his story and all. He couldn't do a thing about it, so he might be secretly sad underneath that superior complex. |
 z-Madness-z 5/27/09 . chapter 1 I kinda figured Naruto would feel lonely and lost. |
 puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 6ok, that was funny. |
 puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 4so sad... |
 puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 3nice. |