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Waterbender of the South 5/6/12 . chapter 6
I also wear the mask of destruction because no one loves me!

"..."

You didn't believe that, did you? HA! I DON'T CARE ABOUT LOVE! I'll eat anything that MOVES!

LOL. I like this chapter by far the most, but I believe that you did a great job getting inside Naruto and Gaara's heads. They were my other favorites.

I also appreciated the tribute to SakuLee (or is it LeeSaku?). I like that a lot. Sakura's chapter was my next favorite.

I'll be honest, Neji's was confusing, but I kinda get where your coming from. And it's true that Neji us extremely difficult to write, so I salute you for your valiant attempt.

Overall, I really enjoyed this story.

Thanks!
nlsdn5 12/25/11 . chapter 5
LeeSaku is beautiful. He brings out the maturity in her, whilst she behaves like a child around Sasuke.
Dezzy13 10/14/11 . chapter 6
I did not see kyuubi coming and all of the stories are great.
Aiseki0Hikari 4/2/11 . chapter 6
Awwe TT

And Kyuubi.. 0/o 'pls don't kill me..for thinking..no..wait!.. For laughing at YoU!
Pepe Le Pew 3/26/10 . chapter 6
I am now totally in love with a fox that's going insane in a human's body. It's hilarious. Poor Kyuubi!
bubblegum-chi 11/16/09 . chapter 6
I love how Kyuubi is so sexually frustrated. HAHA!

The line:

"I also wear the mask of destruction because no one loves me!"

made me laugh so loud that I almost cried! XD

I loved it.

Great Job _
bubblegum-chi 11/16/09 . chapter 3
It shows in your writing that you had a hard time writing Neji's mask.

But I kind of liked it esp. the line

"A genius of spotting other geniuses."

It was well kind of like Neji to me :)

Perhaps it was because Neji's 'mask' was already destroyed by Naruto that you had a hard time writing it.

Love your fic btw.
Belle Mort 13 8/29/09 . chapter 6
Merry Meet

you know

you could write a sequel where the masks are removed and they start to find out who they really are

... exept for Kyuubi but maybe you could give him a chew toy? you know, to work his frustrations out on.

That would be cool

anyway awesome story

good job

blessed be

from Belle
unconnected 7/1/09 . chapter 5
You just changed my outlook on Sakura Haruno. Congratulations.
kyoko131 6/7/09 . chapter 2
Tjis is really cut!e I wrote a story about how naruto wears a mask too. Only ur's is so good!
z-Madness-z 5/27/09 . chapter 3
Now this was interesting. I thought Neji would have a mask to cover up his self disappointment and hopelessness. Because y'know how his story and all. He couldn't do a thing about it, so he might be secretly sad underneath that superior complex.
z-Madness-z 5/27/09 . chapter 1
I kinda figured Naruto would feel lonely and lost.
puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 6
ok, that was funny.
puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 4
so sad...
puregarnet 5/16/09 . chapter 3
nice.
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