ooh interesting! Maybe you could tell the story of how David and them kill Ka Anor cause I think she kind of left us hanging when she finished the series.

ok you piece of shit lissen to me and lissen closely!(dont care about my fucking spelling) ok fisrt DONT FUCK AROUND WITH OTHER PEOPLES SHIT! (meaning u brianless dult that you shouldnt RAT on people cuz trust me i will BRING YOU DOWN!) i know what you have been doing!(telling the ff.net people about other peoples lemons ! my god are you THAT INOCENT AND AFRIAD!) fuck kid get a life and GROW UP! well if that didnt go through you little brian then you truley r hopeless and yes i pulled (o-what-is-it? an Angel-Chan!) i RATED on you! HAHAH you may not think it but there is shit that is not aloud on here that you have done (not saying its just this story!) and you will be geting reviews like this from more then me (BE SURE OF THAT!) AND MORE THEN 1! so BITCH at ya soon (if your acount still exists!):) c yas jackass

Hello. I just went back through my reviews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your fic...you're a great writer! This story is amazing!

cool. great job on getting the writing style. it rocks, not gimme more!

Continue! Pleeeeez?

Very cool. I can't wait for the next segment.

Okay, first I believe Senna, IS dead (that's just me) plus all the prophecies said that no man will ever kill Senna, thus as the scene where April kills her. I don't think April is cold blooded because Senna was evil and deserved to die, and April did the right thing. Whether or not Sennais dead or not might be revealed in book 12, the ending of the Everworld series.But enough of my crap, that was good, you got right into it, there...

That rocked ! Man! I've said it once and I'll say it again...This should have been what was in the book! KAA needs to visit this website, she'd smack herself on the head. "Du'h! Make that a Senna copy! Not actually kill Senna! What was I thinking?" Mhmmm...I like I like I like. Gets a Narfarific ( my highest rating!)

Whoa! That was REALLY good! I love Everworld, and this was a REALLY good fic! You should write more!