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| Siriusly Loopy 2008-08-12 ch 7, | abuseSO GOOD! I LOVE IT! |
| BertieBottsBeans 2008-06-26 ch 7, | abuseAW! I'm all teary-eyed now. That was wonderful. And the ending, of course, was beautiful and so fitting. *claps wildly* |
| Dark Dark Angel 2008-05-22 ch 7, | abuse... Wow! I'm stunned. This... is absolutely amazing. The best Narnia-fic EVER! I loved the brotherly(!) caring and feelings between Peter and Edmund (my favorite character ^^) and you made their personalities so well! ^^ You are very talented!! I'm absolutely sure that this is what would've happened if Edmund died... It would have made sense. And this fanfic harmonizes with the movie too. Yay! ^^ We like the movie, don't we? I loved Ed and Lu's little dance at the end! lol! I guess lil' Eddie need some dancing lessons ;D *kneels and worships* "Oh, great MooMoogle, you are the greatest of them all(+, your name's so cool XD)!!" Bye Bye Dear ^^ ~DDA~ |
| Monkey 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay...Im not gonna cry. Im not gonna cry. Im not gonna--*breaks down in loud, wracking sobs* You killed Ed! You killed him! No!! I am really crying right now. It was so...beautiful, and so sad and...and...ANGSTY! I warn you now, O review readers, NEVER read this at 2:00 A.M. I did, and I swear, adrenilene turned my blood cold while I was reading it. I just cant believe how AWESOME this was, even with tears streaking down my face! This was great. Really, really great. Keep writing Ed angst fics. You're brilliant. Really, really brilliant. I'll shut up now. |
| Italian-Goil 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseAH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! AH! |
| Faithfulpurelight 2007-03-16 ch 7, | abusethat was really cute |
| LadyLapisLazuli 2006-10-27 ch 7, | abuseBrilliant story! I really enjoyed it! |
| vanitys.closet 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is definitely going to my fav.! I'm sorry if, I've offended you, it's just one of my silly trait of voicing my opinion. Don't mind me. Great story! Indeed, I love it and enjoyed it very much! Very moving and powerful fic.! God bless you! |
| lightsabermaster 2006-09-28 ch 7, | abuse"Just like we can only imagine what could have happened to our world, had not one so-called lowly man given himself for us." Simply beautiful. Good work! |
| blasted100 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseVery moving! I love it and enjoyed it very much! =) It broke my heart! |
| dancingkatz 2006-08-06 ch 7, | abuseThis was an absolutely wonderful story. I think you handledthe characters well and even though it was an AU version of th tale it sounded right, everything worked. You definitely know how to write NArnia and Aslan. And your expression of the guilt that Edmund feels...it's always hardest to forgive ourselves even when everyone has already forgiven us. The turned about chase and tackle between Peter and Edmund was a wonderful way to help bring Edmund back the last few steps. Thank you for sharing this. |
| hannah 2006-07-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseOh my god, is this really your first fanfic? Cuz it was incredible! you are such a great writer! Anyways, I absolutely LOVED the story, possibly one of the best I've ever read, and trust me, I've read a lot. You were so descriptive, and I just love how you portrayed Edmund so well, he is my favorite character, after all. Overall fabulous story! |
| elecktrum 2006-07-13 ch 7, | abuseThis was lovely and I loved every word. Bravo Zulu. |
| Lady Eivel 2006-07-13 ch 7, | abuseThis fic's been brilliant! That last line, I think, really summed up what C.S Lewis was probably trying to say in his book. Absolutely brilliant- keep up the good work! |
| vanitys.closet 2006-07-13 ch 7, | abuseNice fanfic! I love it! ...although, I terribly don't like that you used Edmund instead of Aslan to be the "Sacrifice". Missing the whole point of C.S. Lewis' point of writing the story. Anyhow, it's just a fanfic! But I think, you did understood, since you said that, Jesus did sacrifice his life for us. What I love the most, is your understanding of the original story and understanding the depths of "What ifs!" It gave me another understanding of how Jesus truly love us and sacrifice His precious life for us. I love it! And, while reading it, it's terribly breaking every pieces of my heart! The whole fic made me realized a lot of things though, my Christian life, my ourney with Jesus! Thanks a lot! You could be the 2nd C.S. Lewis! Since, you understood him so well, and you writings are almost the same! Thanks a lot! I really enjoy reading this fic! God bless you and good job! :) |