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Stiehl
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Excellent. Good, solid characterization. Could have used a little more background on the enemy, but they weren't the main focus. Very well done, all in all!
you.broke.a.promise
2008-04-27 . chapter 1
I love this.
justastranger
2008-02-11 . chapter 1
-sniffsniff- That was beautiful!
XxkoeyxX
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
That was a cute story... I liked it. :)
gbuilder
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
Simply an amazing tale. Others may disagree, but I think the entire thing has a decidedly muted tone, almost as if this story is told from a 3rd person watching from afar, that has access to the memories of the characters. Like a narrator's view.

But you have written the kind of story I only see once in a blue moon, the kind I crave. And for that, a hearty thanks is in order :)

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

-Dan
ButcherBlues
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
Absolutely perfect. This was a beautiful interpretation of the love between Naruto and Sakura. Thank you for writing this!
leneypoo
2007-10-25 . chapter 1
This was beautiful. Thank you for writing it. The image of Sakura, Hana and Naruto was particularly strong and heart warming and just perfect.
Useful76
2007-10-17 . chapter 1
Pretty good story. Well written and thought out as well. Nice and fluffy at the end. The battle it self seemed ambiguous. Not really a clearly defined enemy. Just a faceless "Super villain" if you will. Still that wasn't the drive of the story so it didn't detract from it.

Good stuff.
ree
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
that was soo beautifully written that the details made me want to cry!
little.red.7734
2007-09-16 . chapter 1
Descriptive, wonderful, makes you both want to cry in joy and jump around like a fool on a sugar high. Ah, haha, no, it was amazing, I loved it, you did an amazing job, it all flowed together so well and I could just SEE it all unfold before my eyes. Thank-you so much for writing this!
ikazuchi-san
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
waw... this was so amezing :)
very good written story *adding to my favorite stories list*

keep up the good job :)
Live For The Flame
2007-07-25 . chapter 1
"Ugh. 'Amazing' doesn't even come close to describing this fic; hell, I dunno if I'm even capable of coherently expressing myself after reading it. You've, in some godly manner, packed so much punch in this that it went over and beyond many multi-chapter fics." ~ O f f beat

Word.
WEIRDkittywwingz
2007-07-11 . chapter 1
aw...cute!
Mew Aqua Spirit
2007-06-07 . chapter 1
Yay! I'm a total NaruSaku fan.
amitay
2007-05-30 . chapter 1
Wow. That was amazing, and your descriptions were incredible. The story drew me in quickly and did not leave me disappointed at the (very satisfying) end, although I do wish you would've gone into more detail with the attackers of the village. You did a great job with the characters overall.
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