 The Tyrant Hamster 2006-11-08 . chapter 6Alright, it was a little late coming, but I managed to read through all your chapters :D. I hope you don't mind just the one review, it's only, it's 2:45am like, so I'm kind of beat XD.
Anyway, this was very distinct in style, it just oozed personality, both Hunk, and the point of view you showed us into his world. His thoughts and reactions gave a truly sharp sense of who he was, and you managed to make him remain an elite among the best, without him seeming pointlessly invincible. All in all, however you did it, it was a quality story and look into the mind of a much-neglected character 8). |
 SecretsofPandora 2006-11-07 . chapter 6I finished this awhile ago but didnt get to comment.
It was an enjoyable read, very very much. I love the action; I enjoyed the way you portray HUNK. Nice work all around. |
 Tyrant Bitch 2006-10-24 . chapter 6I started reading this one, and ended up just reading it straight through! I thought it was a very well done fic, with everyone remaining in character. |
 SecretsofPandora 2006-10-19 . chapter 2Oh my! -squeaks happily- I love this too. I havén't finished reading it, but I'm keeping it on my faves list so I can come back to it. |
 Unrelenting Dead 2006-05-23 . chapter 6*blinks*
Done? No no no, not done.
I really hope you're going to write about what Hunk was doing in RE4. You really seem to understand his character and only you can do him justice, I'm sure.
You sir, ROCK.
Great story, although painfully short (if it sucked, it would have seemed too long, I guess). I'm totally adding you to my favorites list.
High Five.
-Eddie |
 Unrelenting Dead 2006-05-23 . chapter 5“You don’t know? It’s why you’re still alive. The curse of being the last survivor. Because after surviving, all you’ve got to look forward to is surviving the next. And the next, and the next, until you just die, I guess.”
ABSOLUTE FUCKING GENIUS.
For some reason, that struck me right to the core. I hand't felt bad for Hunk, not until now, anyway. Yet, with that statement, I was overcome with the urge to hug the Hunk, even if I received a punch through the face for my troubles.
Great, great, great.
*licks screen and gives you a powerful thumbs up* |
 Unrelenting Dead 2006-05-23 . chapter 4Dude, I'm totally gorging myself on these chapters.
When Hunk ran into Sherry and Claire, I was mightily intrigued. I was wondering how Claire would get away unscathed, what with Hunk being so irrefutably hardcore and merciless.
I have to say, I think the interactions with the three characters is totally believable. The only thing that made me cringe was Claire cursing. Now, I curse like a sailor who just stubbed his toe, but it seemed a bit out of character for Claire.
Actually, forget I said that. What college kid doesn't have a potty mouth?
You should DEFINITELY continue to write. This isn't just some supportive phrase to make you feel better; I really like this story, and I need more! Shit, I'd take it intravenously if I could.
Wait, could I...?
Anyway, PLEASE write more. |
 Unrelenting Dead 2006-05-23 . chapter 1I've only read the first chapter and already I'm impressed. I'm horribly persnickety when it comes to reading fanfics. If within the first page I see a glaring spelling error or the utter disregard for grammar, I give the screen a powerful middle finger and exit out.
Your fic, though, rocked mightily. I never got to play Hunk's game in RE2 so I've been itching to get his side of the story. Also, you write gracefully and beautifully.
High Five.
If you ever want to collaborte on a RE fic, let me know. I've got a few concepts that aren't as lame as most of the ones on this site.
Good job. |
 Ron 2006-04-21 . chapter 4 There is no shotgun attachment for a Submachine gun.
Although there is one for for the colt M4A1 colt carbine.
And as far as SMG reccomdations go...give Hunk an FNP 90...they would be ideal for this type of situation instead of the MP5...those parabellum rounds are the MP5s main drawback...weak knockdown power. |
 green aura 2006-04-18 . chapter 6Okay... Let's make this short and sweet... NA... Let's leave the regular LONG anf thoughtful review :D
Okay... This kind of story is new for me... Believe.. I 've never read a HUNK based story before... Any besides yours of course... So... To begin with, it hooked me up inmmediatly...
And let me tell you that I've just met HUNK in the RE4 Extra Section... Ya know (I suppose you do) he appears in "The Mercenaries" as a Special Player... And oh hell... Sure he's a great fighter... And he actually only has a Sub-machine and 3 Hand Grenades and a First Aid Spray to start with... So that mean he's a great fighter
SO... enough babbling and let's center in the stuff about the story... It's good... But me, as a reader... Honestly... I'm not satisfied... Action was great... The characterization too... Oh Sherry... she's there!... Even the darn cold conversations (If they can be clasified like conv)
But (yeah here comes the but) I dunno... I think more words should have been written for a so mysterious character... Gotcha! I know what's missing... Imagination... Yeah Imagination... More imagination about how is HUNK... Who is really he... YOu uderstand...
I think you're not giving us more than we already know about him... And well... With what that leaves us? With our solely darn over-reactive imagination (in my case) and then we imagine various portraits of him... And suddenly the one you mention pops out...
And what's the point of all of this? Well... it means that you should have written that in actions... not only in words like you did... HOw do we know he's a wolf?
I insist... SOmething's missing... But anyways let me tell you that the story is good... Like the little briefing of HUNK mission :P lol... "Good. Base, out."
Well... I think that0s all I gotta say... Time's out for me... a light recess is coming for my dear computer... See ya soon dude, and I hope this thoughtful review (and again I did it... hella) encourage you to keep on continue writing stories like this one... but better...
Farewells from,
green aura
PS: m not that bad... 5 review paragraphs... sa... Let's keep on rollin'! |
 SnappleAddict 2006-04-17 . chapter 1The MP5 is a sub-machine gun not an assault rifle. Nor does it have a shotgun attachment, but i suppose you're entitled to a bit of lisence. Other than that, I found it to be a satisfactory story. |
 Yuki 2006-04-16 . chapter 3 Okay, hangover sucks. But I really like this story so far, it's smooth reading, some of the stories here are a pain in the * when it comes to grammar and style, but this one is nice. And it's about HUNK. He's awesome. Personally, I think you present him in the right way, he's not out of character, at least that's my opinion, some people here present him in a way I cannot really agree with, but you do it quite right. I also liked the flashback-sequence, I hope, you're planning to "reveal" more of his past, could be interesting.
I think this story is worth to be continued, don't let the lack of reviews disencourage you, there will be more soon, definitely.
Greetings and apologies for my English, it's not my native language ;) |
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